This story finished over 10 years ago now, but it is honestly one of my favorites on the entire site. I have always been a huge fan of stories that were "messed up fairytales" (Shrek, Enchanted, etc) and I definitely got that vibe from this story which I absolutely love. I feel super nostalgic whenever I read this story and it never fails to put me in a good mood. Thank you so much for writing this gem. :)

LOL Axels lyrics! How do you come up with this stuff?!

Haha the whole sandwich thing named after a whale is adorable!

This story is the reason I started writing last year3 this is probably my favorite fanfic I've read. And I never got around to leaving a review for it, but now I can because I found it again! :D but seriously, I fucking love this story.

what's with the chptr names?

Awesome story! It's cute and funny my Fave things! Love it dude!

Aww well this was just lovely I love how you portrayed the characters so much and how the plot unraveled well despite being short this was an enjoyable rad awesome job!

I love this... OAO

This was a really sweet ending with Roxas and Axel holding hands. I liked that. I really liked the story. The humor was very top-notch.

This is a funny but also sweet story. I've enjoyed all the jokes, and one of my favorites was in this chapter, when Axel told Riku he would let him get molested by the guy in the Goofy suit. Too funny in such a warped sense of humor kind of way. XD But, I also have a warped sense of humor, so it's all right.

I also liked the reference to Dio, because I was wondering what Axel's music taste was since he obviously hated Kairi's music taste. XD

Oh, I'm sensing an AkuRoku moment next chapter. That's going to be adorable.

okay i get the titles now..uh i wanted jim. anyways can't wait for the axel/roxas fluff

so i don't get why the titles named jim..but it has me excited. is jim hawkins gonna be in this fic. i love him ]

orlando! ha disney world. nice for a kingdom hearts fic. hope u fit the disney part in. that'd b pretty cool. i think it was a good decision having axel like sora, because it's original. but it makes me mad anyways. axel's such a pushover when it comes to sora in this fic. i just imagine him differently when going after someone he wants. i get it's part of the humor. but i love axel's character...nonetheless i'll read the next chapter and i'm pretty sure the rest of the fic.

Yes, I'm to lazy to log back in. But I finished it! :D IT WAS WONDERFUL! Nice, sweet and simple (in a good way).

... Wow, that was quick... O/O