Reviews for V E N U S F L Y T R A P
Pink Illusion chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Excellent one shot! Great ending- I actually enjoyed the whole thing, but, you know, the ending was cool. I'm a bit bored and it's late at night, so sorry if this review seems dreary. Maybe you can just pretend it's full of kind praise, because that's what it's trying to be. Marluxia in this makes me sympathize a bit with Naminé. Poor thing...

Anyways, have a nice day and I hope this review is good enough.

;D.
fantacination chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
The last line was great! "Of course you won't, you'll just destroy it." XD Axel would. And the loophole in Axel's words~ It was a nice read- not a big fan of marlynami, but it's interesting
Lady KeyBlade chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
Wow. Poor Naminé.

Nice Ending!
Axel's Ashes chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Yay another one! I've read ALL your fanfics (no that's not creepy in any way...) and they're ALL REALLY good!
Knights of Three chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
interesting...
RaieChibiKid chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Dang, you've really been into KH fanfics with names that have spaces in between each letter! Lol.

Liked it. Made some sense. Interesting pairs...

Just one question...

I may have read it wrong but-

"“Of course” She nods and shifts her gaze away from me."

Was that supposed to be "Of course not"? Just...wondering..

Heh... ~sweatdrop~