Reviews for Crossing Lifelines
Gimlifan8 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
That was one of the most in-character Max Payne fic I've read so far, if not the most.
The more I read, the more I realized how your fanfic stood out. I'm not a fan of Mona, so the fact that it was post-one and about Michelle definitely had an impact on me.
I absolutely loved it.
EtherialPromises chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Er. wow. I'm not sure. Does this mean Max is going to the dark side? Well, no matter what he's doing, the way you got him there was great. I really liked he way you made sure the reader got the picture of a completely broken man. My only real complaint is the repetetive nature of his comments but, then again, this is Max Payne after all. Awesome work!