Reviews for The Perfect Graduation
Giulietta Marescotti chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Well that sure was something. This is what should have happened. Rory saying yes and not no. I LOVE IT!
Ria-Dancer Girl chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Oh, WOW! This really was the perfect graduation! I wish this is what happened on the show! In fact, I'm gonna pretend this is what happened! I loved it! I read it twice and I started crying when Logan proposed! I love Rogan so much! This fanfic made me so happy! And the writing was awesome, it really felt like a part of the show! Some Gilmore fanfics aren't very good, just cause this show is so hard to write about! The characters are so vivid and the dialouge is so witty, and I think you represented that really well! I don't think I'll ever write a Gilmore Girls fanfic cause I don't think I could do the show justice. But you did, and when I was reading this story I could hear the characters voices in my head, and could picture the scenes. Thank you for writing this, I loved it and Rory totally deserves a graduation like this! You are so talented it amazes me! And if they're gonna be this great, please write lots more fanfics, I need you to! I'm so glad I read this, I know I'm adding it to my favorite stories list! I LOVED THIS FANFIC! This was way better than the show (as I think I've mentioned before)! I love this story as is, but if you continued it I would love that too! Love your new fan, Ria! Keep writing!
CarebearKara chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Awesome story.
SassyReaderGirl chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
This story is funny. I don't completely believe the engagement scene, but you did a fair job.
Kristen chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
This was really really really good. There were a few spelling errors, such as " rite" should be "right." And " franticly" should be "frantically." But other than that, there were a lot of good parts. I really liked how Logan proposed, and the graduation, and the party on the yacht. Great story! :-)
gg-ghgrl775 chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
So good...I hope something like this happens! I loved it!
girlygirl1212 chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
oh my god i just started crying when logan purpose my fiancee purposed to me at the middle of my valedictorian speech at my highschool graduation so the headmaster said nicolette sarah evertt soon to be parkerson
Krinaia chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
aw, that made me smile!

*A minor note though, you should have used 'right' and not 'rite'.
rawrrry chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
WONDERFUL STORY. I wish this would be how the graduation would go.

“You’re gonna have to make sure you don’t have purple bridesmaid’s dresses.” She said finally. “Blue matches your eyes better.” haha and Emily saying "arent we happy for them richard?" all the time. she says that al the time. haha
Ghostwriter626 chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
giggle giggle
foxymoxy116 chapter 1 . 10/29/2006

This has all sorts of problems, I don't know where to begin.

1. Lame dialouge, it didn't keep me intreseted.

2. Rushed story.

3. Personally, I think that a highschool graduation is a bigger deal. My brother wan't even in town for his college graduation.

4. Do they have valedictorains at a college graduation?

5. If so, why would Rory be one, considering her semester off? If you really wanted her to make a speech, she could have been the class speaker.

6. Capitalization and grammar are your friends.

7. I doubt Logan would propose the day of her graduation, considering that she wants to have a career and what not.

8. The characters are steryotyped - poorly.

9. This is just one giant cliche.

And 10. If you're going to write more, get a beta.
ggfan01 chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
JavaJunkieJunkie chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
I'm sorry but this is terrible. It's a sweet idea, but the writing is awful. It's unbelievably cheesy, I couldn't even finish it.
AlwaysHoldingOn chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
that was so sweet i like it very much.
yana16 chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
its soo good i really liked it i hope ure gonna continue it even if its a one shot D
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