|Reviews for Tanabata|
| satomika chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
This fic almost had me in tears...
I love sousuke's point of view...
Even though externally, he doesn't show too much emotion, his inner thoughts and emotions are astounding and it overwhelms me, and I still love it!
I wish kaname isn't just a figment of sousuke's imagination here...
| Rouyakan chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I think what got me the most is that I really thought you were gonna reunite them at the end. And then to find out that it was just a illusion/vision of Kaname and she wasn't really there... Just broke my heart. :(
So much feels! Great job.
| SmTwilight chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
awe that was really depressing :( good, but depressing
| SuzieCat chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
So sad and beautiful - love it!
| Anthony1l chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
A heartbreaking and original story.
| The Pink Panda17 chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
omg, i just cried a little *sniff* *blinks away tears*
that is so pretty! soo romantic! i love your stories, so keep up the good work!
| unkeptsecret chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
It's such a shame that you don't appear to be writing for FMP anymore.
I think that I fav'd this without reviewing, which is just plain bad form. So here goes!
I've seen and read stories with similar titles and concepts, but this one is superior in practically all ways to those faded rags. This one is so bittersweet that I think that I re-read it twice when I first encountered it: once to get the gist of it and once to savor it. I'm a sucker for a beautiful, sad story. Thank you for delivering.
| Kagami Ikazawa chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This was so sad. Very well written but oh my gosh sad. Well done. Question will he ever find her?
| 1st Lieutenant chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Good and sad story. Want to find out what happens. More chapters please.
| empathapathique chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Well this was very heart-wrenching! Excellent work at weaving the old legend in with the story. And really, the writing was heartbreakingly descriptive. Nice work.
| J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Very interesting. It makes me think of how so many manga and anime stress the "I will protect you" thing and yet, it's nearly impossible. The sense of loss and failure that you write about is normal and the way you present it is good. The reader is left to figure out if they are having delusions, hallucinations or a supernatural experience.
The only odd part is the idea that they shared a bed. I could see it, except that would she have been unguarded on her way to his apartment or would he have been at hers. Other than that, I liked it.
| skye133 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
i love this. i really do. it's written beautifully and, like others have said, is one of the best one-shots out there :)
| Spaleween chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this fic.
I loved it, one of the best FMP fics I've read. And I've always been a fan of tragic stories, and a broken Sousuke never fails to be so endearing.
"No, I'm not. Hit me all you want. Shout and scream. Just don't disappear. Just don't go away."
This line. I had difficulty breathing after reading it. I'll never forget it.
Again, thank you.
| Gothic Butterfly chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
That is both incredibly romantic and incredibly sad :'(
| dylanredefined chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Very well written .Sad and not the sort of thing I normally read have reread it several times .Would love more but understand it leaves questions