Reviews for Deep within
sweetkia13 chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
It was a good story. But what is it with people and pink dragons?
luv4powerpuff aka Joey chapter 6 . 11/26/2006
Joey's my name!i mean nickname..i've been thinking about songs but i afaird you cant use it unless you know Manderin or Chinise this song have no transalation unless...its this one okay so its not exactcly what i think it is ..:

We travel this road to find happiness.

See? You look good with a smile on your face.

These beautiful, fragile days are reborn, unfaded.

In the season of dazzling burned seas

and in the season of dancing snowflakes

whenever I turned around, you were there.

We travel this road to find happiness.

Everyone is a traveler, carrying his own never-healing wounds.

See? You look good with a smile on your face.

How many times have I gotten lost?

Every time, the one who extended hiswarm helping hand was you.

*At the end of this long path, what will we think?

Everyone is a traveler, wandering about in search of love.

Let's go together until we tire of it.

*repeat

-there is still 2 more :

The First Time (Michael Wong)

When you look at me, I haven't opened my mouth

You've already figured out, I'm still not certain

I still haven't filled your requests

Is it that I'm thinking too much, or that you are also avoiding?

If you've really chosen me, I'll muster up the courage to accept

Unwittingly, my line of sight has begun to become evasive

Oh, the first time I said I loved you

Breathing was hard, my heart wouldn't stop trembling

Oh, the first time I held your two hands

I lost my way, didn't know where I was walking

That's the reason for us to be in love

That's the two of us protecting each other (to me)

Oh, the first time I kissed your deep dimples

I wanted to be sober, but I became giddy

Oh, the first time you laid down on my chest

We didn't part for 24 hours

That was the first time I knew what "everlasting and unchanging" meant

I feel that you are a part of me, I feel your pupils

It's the first time deciding, it can't be wrong

-hehe last one!

I've forgotton how long I haven't heard you

Tell your favorite story to me

I've thought so long, I'm starting to be confused

Is it because I did something wrong again?

Crying, you tell me- fairytales are all lies

I couldn't possibly be your prince

Maybe you don't understand: ever since you said you loved me

The stars in my sky all lit up

I'm willing to (want to) (will) become

The angel you love in that fairytale

Open my two hands, they'll become wings to protect you

You must believe, believe we are like that fairytale story

We'll live happily ever after*

We'll write our "ever after" together*

-well hope this 3 songs help!
theXcrucifixX19 chapter 6 . 11/25/2006
love it plz continue. oh and can you read my spyro fanfic when you get the chance plz. it's called the twin princess. love the story.
Blackpelt chapter 5 . 11/20/2006
me: SPYRO!

alex: shes obsessed.

me: SPYROSPYROSPYRO!

alex: ...

me: this story is cool! Pink isnt my color though... but oh well! doesnt matter about me! sparx is actually a good name. i like the name. awesome story! update soon! seeya!
luv3powerpuff chapter 5 . 11/16/2006
i like this story!
dragon482 chapter 5 . 11/16/2006
When could Spyro see the pink dragon again? That scene with Ember kissing Hunter was hilarious! Update!
cooldude22345 chapter 5 . 11/15/2006
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like my faces? oh, great chapter by the way. update!
dragon482 chapter 4 . 11/9/2006
dragon482: That was great! Are the sheep and dragon really related?

Blue Eyes: I don't care about lambs right now, I want some pork chops.

dragon482: Can't you think of anything else than food?

Blue Eyes: Nope. -
luv4powerpuff chapter 3 . 11/7/2006
Col...i'm gonna love this one!:-)
dragon482 chapter 3 . 11/3/2006
dragon482:Woo-hoo! Id still want to know her name though.

Blue Eyes: Do any of you guts have some extra Halloween candy?

dragon482: How'd you get here? And also your only a story charater from my Spyro fic. How can they give you candy?

Blue Eyes: I don't care I want candy!

*punches him in the nose*

dragon482: Sorry about that, it's just my uneducated silver dragon from my story. (And he is a good guy, and yes, Blue Eyes is his real name) It's just annoying that he keeps following me when I review your stories.

Blue Eyes: Hey! I am so edumacallit.

dragon482: Oh yeah, what's 11?

Blue Eyes:0.0'

*passes out from confusion*

dragon482:LOL! Review soon!
dragon482 chapter 2 . 11/1/2006
I wonder why she's the only one. I also wonder what her name is. Continue please or else I'll get my Blue Eyes, my story character, to eat your dinner. LOL! Just kidding.
dragon482 chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
This is in my liking. I wonder who she is. I bet it must be hard for her to be alone because of that curse.
cooldude22345 chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
Hi! your story is great so far. I like the idea of the pink dragon bringing bad luck. It's sort of like in spiderman, blackat is in love with spider man, but she brings bad , update!