That was such an excellent addition to that episode! Thank you so much!

Oh Sam. So limp. Nicely done bit. Favorite part:

Sam fell quiet for a moment. "I just...," he began, his voice soft, broken. "I don't know what I'd do without you."

There were tears in Sam's voice and Dean felt himself go numb.

"Don't want everyone to think I'm heartless. You have been getting yourself clocked a lot lately."

Fingering the back of his head, Sam winced. "Sticked and phoned, actually. Let's not give anyone any ideas."

Just one example of why you consistently rock! More reasons would include the spot on characterizations, the witty banter, and the completely logical explanation that fills in what, to my mind, was a giant gaping plot hole. Thanks for that. I feel better know.

This one was interesting. Just one thing...mind-raped? Where did you come up with that one lol. It is definetely a new way of looking at mind-reading or mind-control

Aw! That was very very good... the brothers were IC. :D

very good! i loved it

Ack! I missed this until now! I just emailed you with more detailed feedback, Faye, but this was wonderful and really filled in those pesky gaps. Great job! And yes, I do owe you a fic. Working on it as we speak!

Your stories are always a joy to read. This was no exception.

Very excellent! Well done! I loved it!

Per usual, Faye, you overwhelm me.

This was amazing. You’ve strung together the missing pieces so beautifully; all the while given us what we so desperately need. What we imagine in our minds’ to occur during the commercials, but this story encompassed so much more then I ever envisioned.

Thank you for writing this.

It was stunning.

Faye, this add on to Simon Says was nigh on perfect. It filled in those worrying gaps between when Sam confronts Webber and Dean's reaction to finding out that his little brother had been hurt (yet again!). The imagery of Dean fingering his own gun readying to shoot his brains out, still suffering the lingering doubts that he deserves to be alive, lingers still. The thought that for a nanosecond that he might willingly pull that trigger and leave Sam alone was scary stuff. And Sam does need him so much now as his world is getting scarier and more demanding. The Demon is upping its game and like a spider in the centre of its web it is slowly but surely pulling in its prey. And poor Dean has no idea how to protect his little brother from him. The brothers may not have all the answers but with them both back into 'brotherly mode' at least they are fighting together rather than each other. Liked how you placed Sam's level of innocence halfway between Andy and that what he fears he might become. With Dean by his side perhaps he can maintain that status quo, it would be too frightening to think of a Sam fighting the darkness that is coming for him alone. Beautiful reflective piece of writing that raises as many questions and worries about the future but still leaves you with a sense of hope that the brothers will survive as long as they stick together.

You write a mighty fine limp Sam. But then again I would expect nothing less from you. You addressed one of my biggest questions about this episode (why did Sam just lie there)and I'm grateful to you for that. I love the brotherly interaction. Awesome one shot!

I always love tags. Good job! :D

hmm. I relly thought there were something missing:D you did a great job "finding" it... or writing it at least. hehe.

At least it beats that choking thing you had going last year."

thats hiraliouse me and my sister call sam the most chokeable person alive