|Reviews for Art of Love|
| animerulesearth99 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
And thus AO was born
| Mad Reminant chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
| NinjaGirlRebecca chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
yes more grate lemony goodness
| Artemis 85 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
dude...stoner is so cooL!...he's just like me...being the dodgy guy with the camera getting free porn! LOLOLOLOLOLOLO...he rocks my socks!
| RentonEureka4ever chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
very nice, and stoner would take pictures of them sleeping togethor!
| EurekaXRenton chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
wow this was a great story please right more for Eureka 7
| Selonianth chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
OMG STONER THEY ARE GONNA KILL YOU!
and holland... and tahlo (cause of holland)... and gidget... and probably moondoogie (because of gidget)
| TheresNothingInside chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
love the story _ and damn that person at the end
| Ryoko77san chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Oh my...Stoner you bastard! They're going to kill you when they find out.
| Midnight-Sunrise018 chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
| Username314 chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Man, you've got skills. One of the best lemons on and definitely my #1. I really like your descriptions which really is what a lemon's about.
As for improvements, there are just a few minor spelling/grammar mistakes. Most of these mistakes are in the first few paragraphs before the action starts, so they're not so distracting once it gets going ;) However, if you can fix up these mistakes it will really perfect the story.
| 1303418 chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Well, this is refreshing, yet still a smut story. I've looked high and low for a believable romance fic, none to be found. I beg thee, XI, write one to show these people how it's done.
| Momo love love stories chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
| Furball-14 chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
very nice very nice you explained it very well its good to see a nice lemon without the smut and the ending was hilarious you should really add a second chapter to show how renton and eureka and the rest of the gekko would react to the rayout cover please update this we only need one more chapter please dont leave us hanging like this
| 94saturn chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
A very nice story. I do have a problem with how Renton deliberately hurt her during penetration, that’s just not like him. More likely he would have hurt her through his inexperience. Not realizing that just shoving it in would be painful.
You need to go back and fix the grammar mistakes and this story is worth the effort. Also find someone to proofread. You have a winner here I love lemons!
DC (AKA 94saturn)