Reviews for Art of Love
Mr. Wasabi chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
I know it has been a long time since you last received a review, but I was very impressed by your work. As a matter of fact, I took a lot of your influence on my own Eureka Seven lemon.

Of course, I'd fix the spelling and grammatical errors, but everything was perfect (including the ending).

If you don't mind, I actually took the liberty of proofreading your work (grammatical and spelling fixes and all, plus some changes here and there) and included an "epilogue" of some sorts as a writing exercise. Of course I'm not gonna publish it; it's your baby after all. However, I can email you my own take on your already excellent work. A remix of a fanfiction, I should say.

Once again, aside from the technical nitpicks I have, great job on this one.
Narushimasu chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
love it especailly the end lmao you should try to find someone who can draw that cover :P
animerulesearth99 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
And thus AO was born
Mad Reminant chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
nice ending:)
NinjaGirlRebecca chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
yes more grate lemony goodness
Artemis 85 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
dude...stoner is so cooL!...he's just like me...being the dodgy guy with the camera getting free porn! LOLOLOLOLOLOLO...he rocks my socks!
RentonEureka4ever chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
very nice, and stoner would take pictures of them sleeping togethor!
EurekaXRenton chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
wow this was a great story please right more for Eureka 7
Selonianth chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
OMG STONER THEY ARE GONNA KILL YOU!

and holland... and tahlo (cause of holland)... and gidget... and probably moondoogie (because of gidget)
TheresNothingInside chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
love the story _ and damn that person at the end
Ryoko77san chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Oh my...Stoner you bastard! They're going to kill you when they find out.
Midnight-Sunrise018 chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Great details
Username314 chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Man, you've got skills. One of the best lemons on and definitely my #1. I really like your descriptions which really is what a lemon's about.

As for improvements, there are just a few minor spelling/grammar mistakes. Most of these mistakes are in the first few paragraphs before the action starts, so they're not so distracting once it gets going ;) However, if you can fix up these mistakes it will really perfect the story.

Cheers!
1303418 chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Well, this is refreshing, yet still a smut story. I've looked high and low for a believable romance fic, none to be found. I beg thee, XI, write one to show these people how it's done.

Yours truly,

-St. Aralor
Momo love love stories chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
perfect!
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