Reviews for Queen Sarah
Artscapades chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Wow this is deep, it's so sad but brilliant writing
marora chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Lovely and well done. Glad to see this wasn't a "Sarah becomes Queen bitch" fic.
Regretting Crimson chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
wow brilliant again!

Skyrere chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
o... this just gave me an interesting idea...

I will see if I can write it...

Thank you.
Kogoro chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
More people should R&R this story! God, how dense can someone be to not see that you have soo much talent in your writings! Im proud to say that I've become absolutely addicted to the stories that you conjure out of that mind of yours, its absolutely wonderful;)

Sighs Just, keep it up :D
Tinuel chapter 1 . 11/26/2006


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The writing style of this...all the emotions, despite having only 1 (two to be exact) lines of dialog.

Its incredible the feelings you give to the reader in less than a thousand words :) Truely.

Its sad...very sad, and beautiful at the last time.

My only suggeston for this amazing piece is that I wished I knew more about Sarahs feelings during the kiss ;)

~Always your most loyal Reader

x-forbiddenrose-x chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
So sad...
Solea chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
I generally hate the "Sarah becomes queen at a terrible price" fics because usually the price is something really stupid. You wrote about a price that really WAS terrible and you win. This fic hits my list of favorites. Glad I didn't write if off and not read it.
ghostofthewaterflame chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
that is so sad! How could you kill Jareth? (all jareth lovers cry over his grave) Awsome that Sarah becomes Queen, but not cool why... you should write more stories!
FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 10/31/2006

that's so...wrong!

I don't know why, but there's something...I don't know...odd and amusing about...

"His immaculate bed..."

Now, why would he notice the state of it when he's about to die?

I wonder if it's a reflection of his current relationship state - some hyperawareness in his last moments. I would assume something of the like since immediately reaches out to Sarah.
VampireApple chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
Aw, poor Jareth... He died for this kingdom. At lest he got to kiss Sarah first...
MayzyGreen chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
This is horrible! Fantastic... but horrible! Eep, you made me CRY in the LIBRARY! Like they didn't already think I was insane! Oh man. But I loved this. It was so intense. My heart was a-hammerin' all the way through. Very well written. But so, SO horrible!
Lila Mae chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
Wow. I, uh, wow. Well written. o_0

~*~Lila Mae
Blcknblu chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
this is really nice. i loved it. almost no dialogue and only detail. really well written. keep up the good work!
notwritten chapter 1 . 10/29/2006