Wow. This is amazing.

Why in the hell would you end a story like that? I like it though.

oh i like the hopeful ambiguity of the last few lines. though i think, as a beta, i would've encouraged you to stop at "woman at the door" it makes it that much more powerful...

reminds me of a classic short story, called the lady and the tiger, actually...

I'm liking this one a lot. Have read it twice since I found it. This one needs a sequel. Either that or add more chapters for a full length story. I wanna know what happens next. How about it?

i know this fic says it's complete but could you expand it? Like a sequal or something?

It's such a great short fic and I would love to see more of it!

Keep on writing!

fireangel

Wow. This is really good. It's an interesting idea and involves my two favorite people. Please update soon! I want to see where this leads!

It was a nicely written story but it seemed wrong that Logan just assumed she would want to be with him and then when he thought she rejected him he was going to just take off with the serum that would have been her only way to touch someone.

I love this story. I hope that you keep on writing this. I can't wait to see where you take it.