|Reviews for Rewrite|
| morgaine has won chapter 28 . 3/1
I absolutely adore this story!
I loved how everything played out so far, and how you brought the characters to life. You really do them justice! I'm really in love with your writing as well, everything flows so naturally, as if their wasn't a narrative at all, and I'm seeing right into the characters' true nature and motivations.
I enjoy this more than the original storyline, mainly for this reason: I don't really have a favourite character from Death Note. I despise Light, and my dislike for L is renewed every time I watch the show again (which shows how fandom!L is really just a fluffier version of himself). Takada (is that her name?) is nothing more than a spineless, greedy, delusional coward to me. The only character that I can stand (all the police officers don't really count for me) and truly find myself sympathizing with is Misa.
Her concept is the only one worth spending a thought on, for me at least. Light is a type (not even really a character) that's been beaten to death in the way it's been reused time and time again. L has a mysterious flair, and a bit of tragedy clinging to him, sure. But his ruthless nature and detachment make it clear that the only part of him that would survive closer inspection intact, is his stance on justice. He's half-assed like that. Which is why I dislike him.
Misa, however, is, how I already suspected and how you prove with this story, a strong concept and refreshing character. Letting her take the spotlight seems like the only worthwhile move to me. And yes, I'm disappointed in the original story line insofar, as it completely underrated and then discarded her time and time again to make place for Light, who is a tired concept that I don't think deserves that much attention. But I liked the ending of the series (And I can stand Near).
Well, this rant doesn't mean that I hate L. I think he's a good character, but a despicable person on a certain level. Still, I really, really enjoy that this fanfic's letting Misa's relationship to him be developed and handled differently. You're doing a fabulous job! If it wasn't clear in my words until here, I think your portrayal of them is absolutely realistic and accurate. The way you nuanced everything up until now was astonishing and a pleasure to read!
So, I don't know the plans for this story, but my silent hope is that Misa comes out as still a wholesome person and preferably not caught in the claws of one Yagami Light. I said I don't think that L is a .. *good* person ... but it is considerably healthier for Misa to latch onto him than Kira.
I get feelings over how Misa is still an upright, not-too-terribly-confused young woman. Thank you for this.
... Dear Lord I sound like Rem.
I read your statement about why it is not the right time for you to be writing on this story, and I support you decision. Whether you update or not, I'm going to favourite this fanfic and send you this (effing long) review.
morgaine has won
| Starlit Skyline chapter 28 . 2/19
I want to cry now...
This is just so good and I kept falling in love with this every chapter, over and over again. *Sigh* There aren't many fics out there that can have such an affect on me.
I enjoyed the way you described the characters, Light and Rem in particular, since it really brings out Misa's blind trust and devoting to the forefront. The dynamics between Misa and L were endearing and never failed to entertain me, and it was very interesting to see things from Misa's point of view - especially as she struggles with her feelings for both L and Light. L is someone she wants to be with her always and Light is someone she would do anything for.
I'm really depressed that this is discontinued - well, I assume it is, since you haven't updated it in four years! - but I'm still going to follow it in a feeble hope that it might be finished one day... that day better comes soon though, I'm rather impatient. Still, thank you for enabling me to read such a brilliant story, even if it's not finished.
| auraleek chapter 28 . 2/10
It's been a long time since you updated.. which I can totally respect because I've done that before. If you ever feel inspired to write again though... you do still have followers. :)
| delax chapter 28 . 2/7
Curses to you and all your eldest child's goats for leaving a cliff hanger!
*Sigh*... since I reached the end, I suppose I need to find more DN fics as good as this one...
By which I mean lots and lots of L.
| delax chapter 16 . 2/7
...Death Notes and crazy go together I think.
| delax chapter 9 . 2/7
Man, the more I read of this, the more I am reminded of how little I actually like Death Note's main character.
If this story could continue without Light, I would be ecstatic.
I just want to see L being ultra-detective!
| emma-nyaaan chapter 28 . 2/5
oh god. Oh God! OH MY GOD!
That was the cruelest cliffhanger EVER!
What she going to do? Why Misa-Misa called Ryuuzaki-san? OH GOD I wanted to know so badly! Btw nice job, I prefer L with Misa though the canon say other wise -3-
Its just cute! But I have this nagging feeling that L care just for completed the Kira's case. Cruel he must be._.
I hope you can finish your writer block though, because its just annoying y'know?
Update please? :D
| Sally chapter 28 . 2/1
Its been 5 years... *sigh* please don't abandon such amazing work this is just too good to end this way. If you see this which maybe unlikely considering its been 5 years please update soon and keep up the great work :)... *sigh*
| SKYSPRITE chapter 28 . 1/24
Have you abandoned this story? I hope that you haven't, because this is the most interesting L x Misa that I have ever read. (I speak the truth.) It is also the most realistic L x Misa I have ever read. And I would be very distraught if you discontinued Rewrite.
| Oh la MatsuKen chapter 28 . 1/17
are you going to continue this? :-(
| Bookworm210 chapter 28 . 1/5
Is this story discontinued or something? I really hope not. Because I LOVE it. It's so dramatic and confusing and emotional. I want to see moar! Please c:
| Andrah.Addicty chapter 5 . 12/10/2013
haha xD poor watari, misa owned him! x3
| Neliel Sanji chapter 28 . 10/19/2013
I've read alot of jumps mainly bleach,naruto and inuyasha,i read your bleach jumps and i like em,this is my 1st time reading a death note jump and i must say,i am very impressed. I love it,the storyline is very mature,you captured both Ryuuzaki and Light just as they are;Ryuuzaki is his usually perching,sugar loving self and Light is... Well Light is Light, the plot is wonderful,i must say i liked the idea of Misa meeting L first before Kira,its better that way. I've finished death note anime and i sincerely didnt like the way it ended cause my sweet Ryuuzaki had to die and eventually Yagami had to die as well,hope your jump wont end that way at least one of them has to live if possible both of them,hehehehe... Guess In a way i'm probably starting to sound like Misa but in my own way i dont want them to die,i love them especially Ryuuzaki, i know you may not believe me but i cried alot when Ryuuzaki died,even though its just an anime it still hurts seeing the one you've been cheering for all the way die,its same thing with Light,i felt bad when he died but i guess for justice to be served it had to end that way,just like Misa i liked both sense of justice cause when one didnt work,the other would but that doesnt make what Light is doing right because no matter the reason behind it a murderer is still a murderer; though i didnt like L's successor Near,he didnt have as much character and personality as my Ryuuzaki,now leaving that aside,please why isn't this jump complete cause from what i can see,i maybe wrong but it wont take more than roughly 5 chapters to complete it and yet you didnt, and you havent updated in 4 years now,its quite disheartening, i was really hoping the story would be complete when i started and i really love the story, so sad
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 28 . 10/6/2013
This story is amazing and everyone is so in character! I love every bit of it. Is there any chance for an update?
| L's huge fan chapter 28 . 10/2/2013
WHAT. IS THIS THE LAST POST? Don't. No. I.. FINISH THIS. PLEASE FUCKING KEEP L ALIVE OTHERWISE I SWEAR I WILL DIE OFF UTTER SADNESS. Kill kira. I hate that mofo. OH LORDY WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN IM SO NERVOUS I LOVE L HE'S ADORABLE AS FUCK COME ON NOW. FINISH THIS! MAKE MISA LOVE L! IT MAKES ME HAPPY I LITERALLY CRIED WHEN THEY KISSED HOLY SHIT MAN. GAHD DON'T KILL MY BABY. AND DON'T MAKE MISA A STUPID LITTLE HOE! Ahhhhh btw I like this fanfic, just please, im DOWN ON MY KNEES HERE WHATEVER GENDER YOU AREMake sure L has his happy ending. Otherwise, no. No no NO. I can't.
K bye! Xx :)