Reviews for Mayflies
kaleik1 chapter 1 . 3/30
so beautiful.. I like this missed one shot that we can imagine what happened with them together on the roof top!
macndee chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Great stuff I loved it the ending was especially sweet looking forward to reading more of your writings
Berryflight-star chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Aww that was so sweet! :D especially the last line... ’maybe there was something to be said about being a mayfly after all...then she wouldn't have to see him leave in the morning’ :’) that line almost made me cry! :’)
julz12 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
good chapter!
Julie Sue chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
what a cute addition to that episode! loves it!
PolkaDot88 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
In search of something to read after the dreadful day I had, I decided to skim through the stories of my favourite authors. Maybe something would spike my attention and so it has! I somehow missed this wonderful wonderful one shot! It was the perfect equanimity between fluff and smut. Never too much, never too little, just...right. And so bitter sweet. Gah! My spirits are higher already! Fantastic work! Thank you.
crissy chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
so sweet. i love the end.
GGmadness2006 chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
aw that was great you trully captured there beauty please postr a lit i think you would do a great job! Again awsome job i loved it!
r'n'rb chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
Beautifully written, the imagery was vivid and subtle all at once.

The last line was perfect, as was the whole of the fic.

Well done, I can't wait to see what your write next.

girlygirl1212 chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
wow great piece
Claire chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
i love your view on this its so interesitng.
Sam chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Great Story..I really enjoyed it :)
maryamij chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
I like how you took one simple quote from last weeks episode and were able to create such a brilliant story. Really good, I enjoyed reading it.
sparkling fire fly chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
Wow! Amazingly written, i think it really captured the essence of Rory and Logan.
katiedv chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Is there such a thing as beautifully written smut? Cause you just wrote it. lol. I love how you incorporated the mayfly into their story. LOVED IT. Absolutely loved it! Love me some Sophie-smut ;-). I didn't mind the C or F words being used at all, though they did stand out when I first read it. A very bold move of yours, in my opinion, but I thought they fit the story completely. These are two young adults in their early twenties that went from living together and probably enjoying a very healty sex life to long distance lovers for almost 5mo. An "I want to make sweet love to you" would be frustrating. These are two sexually frustrated individuals. So kudos on the C and F words! Hope you write another one like these soon!
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