|Reviews for The Right Hand Path|
| cuinwen chapter 1 . 2/28
This is an amazing fanfic and I do hope you update it, but your first chapter is weak compared to what comes after. Do ditch the 'She was right' in the first paragraph because although it is true, it it is a diversion from the main narrative,yes?
And then in the conclusion of the second paragraph, it would be better make up your mind whether 'Mary' or 'the girl' opens the door. I almost stopped reading because of the awkwardness of 'The girl, Mary . . . "
| CleverNickname chapter 1 . 2/23
| Nanchih chapter 16 . 2/6
30 points seems a little excessive. Wouldn't the teachers check out something that caused that big a point loss? Don't the Prefects have guidelines or reviews? Isn't there a logbook that records WHY the points were deducted? I'd guess they could deduct perhaps 5 or 10 points without raising an eyebrow.
| misstaken1 chapter 19 . 1/23
This story is absolutely magnificent. I hope that you update it some day.
| Myra the Sark chapter 19 . 1/22
I have a healthy interest in this story, what with having blown through it in a half-hour. Do continue soon. -Myra
| imka chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
Do please continue this wonderful story! Would Tom find the Chamber in his 7th year at last? What about Defense position? There's hundreds of questions yet unanswered; please, do not abandon this amazing fic!
| Guest chapter 19 . 10/18/2013
This is such an amazing fic! Please don't tell me you've abandoned it completely! I would love to see this updated
| Charlie0925 chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
I truly, truly adore this fic and love this Tom you have created! I like the fact that he has a conscience & isn't all death and angst but that he still has his dark side. I do hope that he won't become the Voldermort we all know, i.e. with the Horocrux's, etc, but rather a dark figure with somewhat decent morals.
Please come back to this and update soon, this is far too good of a fic not to finish .. Please?! ;o)
| morpheline chapter 19 . 9/10/2013
What a great surprise to see that this had been updated. The last time I read it there were only 17 chapters. How happy i was to find more had been added. Hopefully next time i check in for a reread there will be even more!
| AnImEfAN506 chapter 19 . 9/6/2013
Omg! This story is so sweet! It made me cry in the beginning! I hope you decide to continue this story :)
| Madame Minuit12 chapter 19 . 9/5/2013
great story :) I'm looking forward to read more!
| Dardarr chapter 19 . 8/1/2013
Amazing story, can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
| Heroine of the Valley chapter 19 . 7/30/2013
When did you update? I feel so bad. I didn't notice.
I'm surprised that Morfin is wandering down Diagon Alley. I wonder what he was doing there.
| Tup chapter 19 . 7/28/2013
Jesus this is amazing... I'm absolutely in love with Merope and Tom, though I'm a little worried on the subject of Tom Sr. I love how only some things in this AU are changed, and how plausible the situation is. Keep updating this great fic; I'm looking forward to more!
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/20/2013
Reviewing again because this story is amazing! :) You're amazing! 3