|Reviews for Stockholm|
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/15/2013
| Winter wolf chapter 11 . 5/25/2013
Probably the story ever
| BeyondxXxBirthday chapter 11 . 5/22/2011
| Raina Darlig chapter 11 . 4/28/2011
Oh my freaking laws
I LOVE THIS STORY!
I read it all in one sitting and was just amazed the whole way through.
You have a wonderful mind!
| AisLOST chapter 11 . 10/4/2010
Whoa - this is an amazing story. The idea of a story based on the Stockholm Syndrome is good - and you executed it so well.
Your writing style is very, very good. You seem to know perfectly well which words to use and in what order and that makes reading so much more enjoyable.
This could actually be published if it weren't for the copyright stuff on Harry potter and whatnot. And I'd buy it. And I'm sure others would buy it. Also - this story is unlike many fanfics here on . It's different, and that made it exciting to read. I'm glad I favourited this many months ago - so that, once I'd have time, I'd read it.
Severus and Amanda are written so beautifully. They felt very real and I felt that you captured Severus' essence perfectly. Great job on that.
Thanks again for writing and sharing such a great story. I just read on your profile you are (or were, depending on when you wrote that) debating a sequel - I'm up for that!
| AisLOST chapter 8 . 10/4/2010
Lovely chapter. I remember now she's called Amanda. Oops. Sorry about that, I tend to forget/overlook names alot..
This: 'It's sad, but there are so many Weasleys, something is bound to happen…' is exactly what I was thinking before I'd read it.. haha.
| AisLOST chapter 6 . 10/4/2010
Great chapter.. this one was pretty hilarious at parts.
The Potter Puppet Pals bit was funny, too :P
It's interesting to read about Snape loosening up to her. I've got to say, This is already one of the best fics on this site; it's very innovative and well-written.
| AisLOST chapter 3 . 10/4/2010
This is brilliant. Absolutely stunning and I've only read the prologue and two chapters. The girl (I don't think I've read her name yet) is very well written. I can picture her perfectly clear in my mind, not the way she looks obviously, but the way she behaves and acts.
Snape, too, is incredibly in-character. Here on his personality softens up a lot, but really, in the books he's pretty much always mean. Exactly how you wrote him.
I had to giggle a little at this: 'I took one bite, and about fifteen minutes later I felt no effect, so I finished it, still worrying an hour later if I'd die from poison'
- Because that's exactly what I'd do in that situation.
Also, this, too, seems familiar to me: 'I'm not really good at the whole witty comeback thing unless you give me three hours to come up with one and a pad of paper to write it on.'
I'm pretty excites here because there's 8 more chapters left.. so you'll hear more from me in the next review. For now, thanks for writing this and sharing it!
| OMOCHIKAERI chapter 11 . 8/25/2010
Her stutter was slightly annoying but I liked the overall story. 83
| SnapesLvK chapter 11 . 8/13/2010
Very good story! It was fun to read it but i hoped that there would have been some romance between Amanda and Snape. xD And i wish she woud have hugged him. xD The story was nice anyway. :)
| misundersnape chapter 11 . 8/6/2010
Unique and very enjoyable!
One little personal quibble - really, Alan Rickman misrepresented Snape? Granted he is a little old for the role, however when he was cast Snape's age was not known. Anyhoo... I prefer to think of him as his Hans Gruber age, then he's perfect in my opinion... as humble as it is... ;)
Great job overall - and I wish my own experience I had that was similar was not mere fantasy or dream... *sigh* (You can read about mine in third person via my profile page ;) ) *snicker*
| Eriklover101 chapter 11 . 7/19/2010
wow good story i hope that they would be a sequal to this.
| RebeccaRoy chapter 10 . 3/1/2010
Awe Severus is going to miss her!
| RebeccaRoy chapter 8 . 3/1/2010
So now she's Severus's, he will protect her that is for sure.
| RebeccaRoy chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Ah so they are becoming friends here, that is good.