Reviews for Holding Forever
SlowSnail chapter 4 . 5/23/2012
More? _
stargatemom chapter 4 . 3/15/2008
Great story please finish even if the story is not a long one. Great job
stargatemom chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Great story but you need to finish it update soon.
bluedragon1836 chapter 4 . 11/24/2007
i love it. i loved the first one too.
LetNys chapter 4 . 4/21/2007
Great story I read the original today and loved it I can't wait for the next update
hijadelrey7 chapter 4 . 4/5/2007
I'm very new at the fanfiction thing but I am really enjoyed your original story and this one looks very promising as well. Thanks for all the hard work!
forestwife chapter 4 . 1/28/2007
really good so far, update soon!
devianttart chapter 4 . 1/27/2007
Okay, here is why I like this story and here is why I am not sure about it.

I like your characters. Nice to see Daniel happy for a change.

I don't know where you are going with the story, though. Four chapters in and I am not sure what the story is about. Daniel has his child...and now what?
TooOldForThis1993 chapter 4 . 1/22/2007
:) Happy feelings all around! Yay! I can't wait to see how Daniel will cope with being a dad...

Nighshae chapter 4 . 1/14/2007
Yes, do please keep it going...
devianttart chapter 3 . 11/29/2006
Wow. A baby created across two dimensions. I have no idea what thay would really mean. Interesting!
Fille de Tsuki chapter 3 . 11/28/2006
All together now, 1 2 3 AW!

I wonder if there's gonna be more of a plot to this, and if so, what it will be.

But in the meantime, so cute!
Fille de Tsuki chapter 2 . 11/23/2006
Yay! I cannot wait for the next installment! I just came across and read "How Long Is Forever?" yesterday and, as you can see, I'm really hyped about this story.
Freebee chapter 2 . 11/19/2006
Yay, great idea for a story! Love Daniel and Shau're but I wonder how Vala will feel about it ;) Whats the 'something they want Daniel to see ;) I'm intrigued hehe, update soon :)
devianttart chapter 2 . 11/19/2006
I know you belive in happy endings, but someone I fear heartbreak in this one...
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