Reviews for A Royai Halloween Story
srdfgchvjboguvjh chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
l written, nice beginning, but a tad corny. and Riza was OOC. make her a little more drunk before she gets weepy. and did hughes just, lik, sneak into Roy's house in the dead of the night while playing the mission impossible theme? the idea needs to be reevalutaed, but very cute overall.
FanFictionFanatic chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Entirely too senseless.
OTP chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
very well done
kaely chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
It’s kinda out of character that riza would ever wear a maid costume, but putting it aside it’s a sweet and funny royai fic. :) I love royai!
Asucaga Hitomi chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
KAWAII!Its SUGOI 'The New Fullmetal Alchemist'!

Continue writting RoyAi fics onegai?

SidekickKep chapter 1 . 11/3/2006

When I think of clowns... I think of Stephen King's "It". But Maes, oh yes, he makes everything worth while.

When I think of vampires.. I think of Dracula. But Roy. Wow, he makes himself sound real... odd. I could hear him with his poor Transylvanian accent. ... It's funny sounding.

When I think of maids, I think of Merry Maids... you remember those one commercials that were of those girls 4 years ago? Yeah those. Riza... a maid...?

"Happy Halloween! Happy Halooween!"

...Crazy clown...
Hyrulian Hero Akai chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
kawaii! aw so cute Nat awesome job. I can't wait to see the new cracked out story XD