|Reviews for A Raw Deal: Chapter 1|
| dylanredefined chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
this is kind of cool thanks
| grilledcat chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
Very nice! I love well written self insertions. My only major complaint is the formatting. It looks kind of funky all blocked together and may be a turn off for some people.
Post chapter 2! _