Reviews for untitled
nguyen24677 chapter 4 . 6/3
PLZ MAKE A NEW CHAPTER
Kim-chan chapter 4 . 12/5/2016
Nuuuuuu! I want this to be continued!
Sliver Crystal of Tokyo-Moon chapter 4 . 7/7/2016
Love this story. Please continue this story.

I want to know what happen next chapter...

Will Naruto tell his kid's father truth about the twins and everything? Will sasuke found out about being father of the twins? Can he accepted this truth?

And again, please continue the story and trying make it bit longer...
TheCheshireKiller chapter 4 . 1/28/2016
Amazing job looking forward to the next chapter
Mindy the Witch chapter 4 . 12/16/2015
OMG this is so good! Why did u stop?

I sooooo want to see Sakura's, Sai's, Shikamaru's, Gaara's and obvioully Sasuke's reaction!

Please come back to write this one! If you're stuck I can help u... PLEASE 3
Natsuki D chapter 4 . 10/24/2015
Oh poor Naruto (-_-') that had to hurt
Can't wait to read more!
DeathAngel92 chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
Love this story can't wait till next chapter :)
phantomlady13 chapter 4 . 8/28/2015
This is great ! Really !
But i want next chapters ! *pout*
What the colours of their's eyes ?!
Will Sasuke be angry n know ?
Uchiha Natsumi chapter 4 . 7/24/2015
actualiza pronto ya que llevas años sin actualizar y quiero saber lo que dirá Sasuke cuando Naruto le dija que el es padre sera super interesante
Guest chapter 4 . 7/22/2015
Can't you finish it?
streetfihhtersabrina chapter 4 . 7/10/2015
Amazing story want more
Guest chapter 4 . 5/31/2015
Great story! You should continue!
Edith47 chapter 4 . 5/26/2015
The story's plot is good. Work on misspelled words and grammar. There are several sentences that I had to insert the correct wording to understand what I thought you were trying to convey.
Titania1796 chapter 4 . 5/24/2015
espero que actualices pronto y cuando Sasuke se dará cuenta que es padre
solitare1 chapter 4 . 5/23/2015
You had a great start here, really sad you couldn't finish it. Well, if you ever come back, we'll be waiting.
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