|Reviews for The Sinner's Soul|
| Sword Maniac chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Interesting thought. Lose his humanity? But definentally a good shelloyd!
Could easily expand this to a larger storyline (pre and post).
Let me know if you are going to do more. I'll definentally read it!
| CommodoreZelda13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
That was really good! I mean seriously, I wish I could write like that! And the whole Sheena and Lloyd thing works for me. (Anything to keep Sheena away from Zelos is good!) Anyway... yeah that was great.
| Saber Girl Jaina chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
| Riptos-Calavera chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
OMG Puncutation. *Gets stabbed* nah im only joking, I was unsure where this was going at all to begin with, however I got there in the end.
Interesting twist in there and pretty deep.
All in all, not bad heh.
| doragon no mizu chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
Hm, interesting plot line... and YAY! a Sheena Lloyd! ::happiness::
I think I have an idea as to where this is leading, BUT I honestly can't say I do, since there is an infinite amount of ways his can turn. As is the job of the writer to leave the main direction of the story a secret until it comes up. And, at least so far, you're doin' a great job of it! As always! n.n
Peace, Love, and Pimp'kns.
OLD LADIES! XD
| Strawberry Eggs chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Hey, there's no need to worry about my reaction the pairing in this. Sure it's not one I agree with, but I'm mature enough to not mind it.
After all, this was still very well done. Even though it's not a favorite pairing of mine, I still thought it was very sweet. That was his last night as a human...and he left his soul with (the person).
All in all, this was one-shot was a wonderful addition to Sealed Fates, and shades quite a quite more light on everything that it happening, especially with the last chapter of SF. As always, a story well done, Arky!
The Sinner's Soul...so he DID become a sin bound Haibane after all! XD *Gets sent flying by a high jump kick from Serene*
I deserved that...
*Is still dressed as Amawa-Sensei XD*
| Shane chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
HOLY CRAP THATS GOOD!
| lloyd-forever chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
OMG wat the heck is Lloyd doing? holy geezuz... oh well it'll turn out all right in hte end XD tee hee awsmness! LOVE IT! *dances* HAPPY HALLOS!