Nice character development and back story. Most people forget Uchicha didn't become super psycho till after he got the tattoo.

Why'd he tell Iruka his real name? That's kind of the f*cking point of wearing a mask and operating under a code name; Not going around telling people who you are.

This is where I stop...

SINCE WHEN DOES IRUKA CURSE?

This story would be greater. If his true name wasn't know and he simply was known as 'Hunter X' in the village and in the bingo book.

Nice touch with the hallucinogenic poisoning symptom. I would love to read another chapter!

...how gruesome. Somewhat interesting, well written. But doesn't keep my interest

update pls. it's been 2 years. ToT

please oh please update i love your Naruto story

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I really do love what you do with the sneezing. I personally think those moments are the most hilarious in the story, and add spots of humor all over the place. Keep up the good work if you continue writing this.

Great story so far.

PLZ UPDATE!

HEY! Don't diss cannon Naruto! A lot of his stupidity is an act same as Jiraiya's. Then there was the sabotage of his education and the trauma's he went through growing up. He's not as you put it "a retard" he just happens to be overly optimistic and slightly naiive. He's dense at times, but that's as much from poor education and socializing as it is from the fact that thinking too much and asking questions would lead to the despressing reality of his life, no answers and more questions. By the time he found out WHY the villagers hated him, which was the biggest issue, he'd already developed the habit of not thinking too much about things. Also playing dumb made him seem less threatning. Simple survival tactics.

He's a happy go lucky kinda guy with infinite potential. He also happens to be my favorite character, and I'm not the only one!

Huzzah for hallucinogenics. Please continue the plot.

Sakura KICKED-ASS! I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE!