Reviews for Fragile lives
fire-dancer123 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Objection! Where the's rest of the story? Sequel PLEASE!
ItIsn'tMusicIt'sAnObsession chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
OMG You need another chapter! Please update!
becca chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
It's cute. I'm a little confused but still it's cute.
Cupid's Jinx chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
Aww! Sweet, and sad, and I like that song!

Lyra

x
BeautyInBlack chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Aww! It's so cutE I love it! You and your story are going on my favs!
Heta-Ninja chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
I've never seen Max riders...but I'm reading anyways.

Aw...sweet love of those I don't know...

Rock Lee: THE SPRING TIME OF YOUTH IS IN THE AIR!

...ok...you poping out of no where was suprizing...

-Ellen
B3lly chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
HEY THAT WAS SO PERFECT AND HOPE YOU KEEP UP WITH IT...IT SHOULD BE MORE OF A STORY THEN A ONE SHOT BUT THATS JUST ME BUT REALLY IT WAS GOOD
EdwardAddict chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
I liked it. Cute and adorable.

EA
IcePixie24 chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
That's kinda sad. It's short but hangs in ur mind. I thought it was brill!

IcePixie24
Alledaria chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
Woah... dude, that was really good! Love the song, very sad, though. Are you gonna write more? PLEASE say yes! Please oh, please, oh please! But... Angel d-died? I think I will cry now... Very good fanfic, though.

Luck, Steph
888888888888888888888888888888 chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
it was good. I think you could easily do a follow up about the note and where Max was. Great job!

P.S.-it's good to see another guy writing on the Maximum Ride section of Fan Fiction! lol
IllaSc chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
YAY!

Ben, that was so good. I must say, you've shown a lot of improvement. Kudos!

Twizzlers,

Illa
BooneTheDoom chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
nice oneshot. you should make it into a story
Running to Stand Still chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Cool, I liked it; a bit choppy, but good. Faxness rules!

Happy Halloween!