Reviews for Lullaby
Talon83 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Hm... Rather creative. I like it. BUT; You missed part of one of the verses:

...And their branches to hands, they’re not real, understand

And I am here tonight

AND SOMEDAY YOU'LL KNOW

THAT NATURE IS SO

THE SAME RAIN THAT DRAWS YOU NEAR ME

FALLS ON RIVERS AND LAND

ON FORESTS AND SAND

MAKES THE BEAUTIFUL WORLD THAT YOU'LL SEE

IN THE MORNING

For you know, once even I

Little child, and I was afraid...

I hope that I was helpful!
Seria KE chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Aw! Dang it! :( I wish my dad was that compationet! My da is just angry all the time and takes his anger out on me, no he dosent hit me but he yells and it hurts when he does. Da## it! He is allways yelling and the universe is proveing me right he is yelling right now at my mom. Well this was really touching and it made me cry for some reason.
Queenphoenix chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Beautiful. Though I must say, I see anything remotely resembling verse, and I start scrolling as fast as I can go...

A strange habit, especially considering I do not exactly loathe poetry...
fox-chan380 chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
One word adorable !
Honto.Kawaii.Neko-chan chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
I WUVE THAT SING I know it for a year or so now..and I love it!

thnks so much for this fic! XD.. it was really needed. a naruto fic with lullaby

Wub it all the way

Wub ya to course XD

Neko-chan

*hopes to find more sweet fics soon too*

(btw; ya know the song "Between - vienna teng" ? I advise it ya!)
Maned Wolf Goddess chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
so sweet
Julia Burn chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
This is one of my all-time favorite songs! Very sweet!