Reviews for Ten for Ten: Listen
Getso chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
That ending was absolutly yes.

I loved it.

The whole story was written well and the ending was just brillant.

It sumed it up nicely without being terribly lemon-y & explict.
avery18 chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
I can totally see Tenten doing that on their wedding night. Weapons all. :P Poor Neji.
Kane Shi Megami chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
*fans herself* Wow it just got a wee bit hot in here XD Love this, and your Tenten is great :)

KSM
AmethystDreamer chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
that was soo funny and cute!
Aiko chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
lol! This was really good! I was worried for a second, but it all ends well. _
OriginalBubble chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
whohoo! who doesnt get a naughty little smile when tenten and neji pop up on screen - they MAKE you think naughty! lol, loved the ending *wink wink nudge nudge*
cathaya chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Perfect. Really and truly perfect. It's just so beautifully NejiTen lol. Very well written! Yay for the author!
Xanie chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
Ohh. . .So much passion. . . Wahehe. . .
Aryanne chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Tenten is ridiculous in this, and that's what makes it funny.
Sunshine and Puppies chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Interesting take on Tenten. As there isn't a lot given about her in the manga yet it is always neat to see how people write her.

You have a few puncuation errors and I believe you have a few grammer errors (I could be wrong and they could just be odd phrases). Get a beta that loves them some english or comb through the fic again and see what you get.

Have a nice evening.

Sunpies
sora girlfriend chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
te-he-he
Verdandil chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
That was quite brilliant. "Bed grappling" LMAO. Nicely written. I liked the one-shot very much!
scorpion05 chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
gosh this was so cute

loved it!
TheSilverMirror chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
woot wot wot! Syaoranhime you rock!
rachellephant chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
WOW.

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