Reviews for Desert Love
246vili chapter 10 . 1/9
So instead of Konoha, Akatsuki has captured Ayame for the same reason.
Damn, so a lot of Naruto's friends died already? What a shame.
Well it was a pretty good story, too bad probably you won't continue it, since the last update was in 2006 dec.
246vili chapter 7 . 1/9
A three-way while riding on a warfan after a brutal battle... well, you don't read lemons like this very often (at least not me).
For bloodline I think the wood based (mokuton) and the teleporting are both cool, but maybe teleporting would be more awesome. After all, if he's the son of the Yondaime, then why not make the Hirashin no jutsu a bloodline based technique.
246vili chapter 6 . 1/9
Wow, Naruto made a pretty nice slaughter. Won't be suprised if the Konoha council puts him in the Bingo book as an S-claas nin after this is over.
246vili chapter 5 . 1/8
Gaara's last statement was... unexpected I guess. I wonder how will the two girls respond to this.
Christian chapter 7 . 12/13/2013
Ability to absorb materials
Veldrisk chapter 10 . 5/31/2013
You do realize that Naruto also means Maelstrom which is how his name is used in the manga/anime?

Also this is an excellent story and I would love to see it continued.
Sammywolfstar chapter 10 . 4/6/2013
Everyone is going to die if Naruto doesn't kill them then Kyuubi will.
Ultimate Challenge writer chapter 10 . 2/19/2013
Sorry about the before random shit I didn't notice that there was more then 8 chapters I am kind of dense okay and this is bull why the hell didn't they just think to ask gara to help look because that would what should have been done
Ultimate Challenge writer chapter 7 . 2/19/2013
absorb materials if you have to use one of them
Ultimate Challenge writer chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
Nice hyuuga's are happy remark do what I asked earlier
Ultimate Challenge writer chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Give him a new pet fox that is kyuubi's escape after he finishes changing naruto physically, give him a cool katana that is crimson blade with jet black hilt and a fox like look to the hilt, and a blood line that give him a lightning, water, and wind affinity or something like that
Ultimate Challenge writer chapter 8 . 2/19/2013
Give him a blood line of turning his body into metal or something
ryu chapter 10 . 5/4/2012
naruto also means maelstrom anyway good story
Ryu chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
You got that last part about stickville from it should be interesting. story is great by the way.
Olaf74 chapter 10 . 9/16/2011
*removes his Jaw from the floor*


You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.

Please continue the story very very soon.
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