Reviews for The best day of my life
PowerpuffDigigal chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
This was awe-worthy but he knew Kari when she was 8,making her 11 in Adventure . n.-
LucasHopeful4Life chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
AWESOME STORY FOR TAKARI
angelwing0034 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
very sweet story i love your fanfiction i can wait to see more
twilightgirl08 chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
this is a one word review...

AMAZING!

~Twilightgirl08~
Samurai.J chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
i have to say, i'm a sucker for romance fics. especially the good ones and this was cetainly a good one. the park was possibly the part that really sold the romance and kind of put more emphasis on T.K.s part in the "date". great recomendation and even greater fic!
Moonlight Petal chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
This story is so cute!
franchi chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
puasluoma!

it was a really good story!

i really liked it!

I think that if you are more stories you are going to become a better writer!

One thing though, in my opinion you should put quotation marks on your dialogues cuase it can be confusing some times.

but besides that, your story was good!
Inspired Writer 0101 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Sweet story. That's really amazing.
saruwatarikoumiko chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
') That was so sweet!

Just a little note though, frizz does not mean to be cold. I don't know if it was a typo, but the word for it is actually freeze.

Anyway, other than that, I loved how you used Kari's POV and ... and... AGH everything was soo cute! You MUST continue writing more fics! Please?

~Koumiko
HopeandLight111 chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Wow that's a really good story! Usually I don't like short storys but yours is really great!
AlbertaxRose chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Aww, that is so so cute! I love the idea.
Stephy-Dearestxxo chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
Great Story
puasluoma chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
aww!
kathlaida-princess chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
wow, it was so beautiful! you really did great!

keep up the excellent work!
Clockwork Storyteller chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
aww, this is so good. i want to be Kari
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