Reviews for Downpour
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
Hey, look who hasn't read the manga! Hanon is the Aquamarine Pearl Princess, not Blue Pearl Princess, and the Green Pearl Princess's name is RINA, not Lina. (That's something that always bothers me with most subbing of the anime. They get Rina's name wrong.) The fic itself is really good, but I really can't forgive the wrong names. (Even though it is most subbed versions of the anime's fault.) If you ever wantes to give another LuchiaxKaito fanfiction another shot, I would suggest reading the manga first, since it's much more mature than the anime in the first place, and would be a great place to find ideas. (Especially when Kaito goes shoving his face in Luchia's boobs in one of the panels at the start of book 6 I believe.)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
mermaid melody pichi pichi pitch kaito sex lucy
Kreahe112 chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
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addie-chan chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
That was so cute and perf 3
sophia chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
best...story...EVER!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Aww
101 chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
I LOVED IT! Plz do more!
Lizzy-Margaret chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
lol the ending was cute :P
Major Payne Crew Chief chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
That was perfect.
GreenPearl Atlantic Aries chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Holy cow! This was seriously one of the best lemons I have ever read! You have fantastic detail and nailed the characters' personalities perfectly! And I love Hanon and Lina's little cameos, too! 3
Sayuri Lapis chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Love it!
Kawaiibou chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
I love it! ouo
Ichigo kurosaki chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
That was awesome!
You did a great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
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anonymous chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
i wish sb made a vid out of this...it would be interesting.
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