Reviews for Tangled in Moonlight
KaKashi's Okami chapter 6 . 6/20/2010
oh, man even though you stoped writing on this on it was awesome! your writing in the other is a bit more fleashed out than this one was, your wording and grammar is better, i just loved the end where sakura said "...i think i broke you..." that made me laugh my but off. I am looking forward to the rewrite with the hopes that you mix in some humor.
cutecrazyice chapter 6 . 4/7/2008
This is a great fic. Why discontinued?
Sakura-rocks106761 chapter 6 . 7/20/2007
Please, please, please hurry up and update! And I'm not one to beg, either. But this is a special case-PLEASE!

I like the story, can't (much to my annoyance, lol) find any spelling errors, and just wish you would hurry up and fuckin' update, god dammit! Lol, sorry!
Kakashi1334 chapter 6 . 6/10/2007
Wait... that was awesome and all but... that was the end?

I really like it though. You're awesome!
optionxx1 chapter 6 . 5/3/2007
I am kinda confused... so is Milk Moon going to take over Moonlight? or... is it a sequel to Moonlight? I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS after ch.6 ... it's like KILLING ME! Ch. 6 was like a HUGE cliffy AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT! PLEASE CONTINUE IT SOMEHOW! Just tell me if it's going to be in Milk Moon and I'll LOVE YOU FOREVER! XD
moodiful819 chapter 6 . 4/25/2007
I love it. It's bloody brilliant! It's wicked, funny, and tre chic. (I had sugar, hence the strange european lingo strewn like the cans on the backs of wedding limos) I wish I could write like you, but sadly, I can't, so I'll just end my review and put this in my fav's.
Lyneia chapter 6 . 4/25/2007
This was a hilarious chapter! You are a good author. I laughed my head off at the bedroom scene. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
In True Meanings chapter 3 . 4/25/2007
Hey this is good. I thought I read something like this somewhere before than I remember you said u rewritten this. Than I checked and I saw I had already made a comment for chapter one, probably from the origional 1st chapter. I have to say though. Sakura and Kakashi's relationship here is a bit jumpy and weird. One minute their friends and the next their avoding each other. There not even dating. Maybe it's just your writing style that is making me think this story is odd. ::shrugs:: I still want to read more though!
Joanie S chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
You've definitely got me hooked. Can't wait for an update :)
Dolphingirl32173 chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
Sarah: um... wow that was... astounding. wow, ya published it 5 days b4 my birthday and updated 4 days after my birthday, what a strange coincidence. love it. update soon, if ya will? this will be in my c2 and on my story alert list
Love Me Like Sunday chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
I like the re-write! I liked it before, but it was very depressing.

I only found one little nit-pick.

"I am unaware of this has been mentioned in the reports, as I have not been privy to them," he cautioned, and she reigned in her impatience to a short nod.

I think the "of" should either be "if" or "of this being".

I hope the other chapters will be finished soon!
feifu chapter 6 . 12/5/2006
I can't imagine Kakashi without Icha Icha on his person like an additional extremity In any case, when's the next chapter gona be out? And how many will there be? I just love reading this fic _
Kismet's Kiss chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
omg why havent you updated! I hope your okay and all is well with the family and your not to stressed.

okay now im going to go all selfish mode, UPDATE RIGHT NOW! Im dying for this fic to be updated, I love the humour of the recent fics, but i can just TELL your going to revert back to the semi angst, right? right! I hope so...

oh! and rem how i said i kept rereading the ending lines of ch1? i did it again... :pouts: and cried!

"I should have killed you when I had the chance." Conversational, bland, regretting missed opportunities.

im thinking, it wasn't specifically mentioned that he said that to sakura, was he saying that to kakashi? dear lord,! This story has such mystery, such angst, such humour, and love, undying devotion, and i simply must know sasuk's parting words, please update! Im sucha fangirl of you right now hehehe, and if your not going to go back to all angsty and make it humour through and through until the end im okay with that too, but prays be too good i will probably ask for your permission to make a side story to this, like a one shot or something.

anyways you know i love you and this story, and i should not stress how much i want you to update anymore for i think i have enough hehe
Starcrossedhere chapter 6 . 12/3/2006
This is halarious, adorable, romantic, sad and just absolutely great! I've really enjoyed reading this story so far, and i'm dying for more! Awesome, awesome, awesome. Okay, that's all i have to say.
esther chapter 6 . 11/20/2006
it's actually kind of creepy reading this fic. i feel like it's been written by two completely different, equally brilliant people.

i mean the angst and grit of the first couple of chapters were really IC and looked to be making a promising adventure/angst fic and then suddenly kakashi MOLESTS sakura in his sleep and from there it goes all comedy and raining porn and kakashi being REALLY OOC and calling sakura darling and sweetheart all the time O_O

is it really kakashi? i think sakura really did break him...

i feel like i'm reading two different stories...it's really good, just a bit whack.
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