|Reviews for Untitled 13|
| jdho chapter 25 . 2/13
I know the story is old, but I really liked it! Thanks for writing it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I really enjoyed this! Plot, smut & good writing style all in one. You made Steph, Ranger & Joe true to character and I especially liked that for Joe cuz he IS a good guy. Thanks for sharing.
| galwithagun chapter 25 . 7/5/2013
Fantastic read! I really enjoyed this story. :)
| BearcatsRock chapter 25 . 5/15/2013
This is a great FF! Loved how you used the whole Scrog story line...very clever. I have been reading this over several weeks when I have a break at work and it provided great entertainment. Great job!
| VVine chapter 25 . 5/4/2013
Great job :) I loved this story
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/4/2013
So, obviously, I'm very late to JE fanfic as I'm commenting 6 years after this was posted. But I just had to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. The characters feel true and the storyline is intriguing! Belatedly, thanks for writing such a great story!
| rangerbabe.1 chapter 25 . 11/18/2012
Absolutely LOVED it! Love their ability to be perfect for each other and still be so stupid at times. Thanks for sharing a great story... It a cliffhanger ending. (I haven't checked) But I'm hoping there's a sequel!
| Guest chapter 25 . 11/16/2012
Naked Yoga with Ranger! Yowza!
| Vulcan Rider chapter 25 . 3/20/2012
I'm so glad I found this story. It has been a real roller coaster ride from start to finish, but I loved every moment of it. I really loved the scene where Steph had her moment getting to "interrogate" Javier at the station. That was priceless. I'm glad he turned out to be a good guy, though. It was also funny how he went from talking all "street" to very literate; reminded me of Ranger telling Steph he was "multilingual" when she mentioned the same thing about him in "One For the Money". LOL
I always figured Scrog would reappear, even before I read the rest of the books, and I hope you've gotten to read all of them by now. I love your take on the characters and yes, you've really nailed all their personalities. The scene with Lester seeing her naked was priceless. :-)
I really liked how Steph found Ranger after Scrog kidnapped him, and the way she earned the respect of all the guys, all over again, especially Marco. He really surprised me. I know she hates being tracked, but it seems that with her plethora of stalkers, she really should keep the internal tracker in all the time. Perhaps Ranger could set it where he could deactive it and PROMISE her that he would only activate it during times of crisis.
The love scenes between them were not only so very HOT and erotic, but so tender and passionate. It really showed just how much they loved each other and that they made love with everything in them, all their love, emotions and tenderness. That is what makes their love so very special. It's not just about sex, but truly making love.
You've done a fabulous job with this story and it will be going into my Favorites. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us.
| sbabe chapter 25 . 3/15/2012
| BingChiLing chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
I know you wrote this awhile ago, but it's an amazing story.
| fire-dancer123 chapter 25 . 1/15/2012
Okay... Great story plotwise and all. However I'm starting to think Ranger needs to kill scrog like you have to kill a vampire. A.K.A. dismemberment, burning, and then scattering the ashes all over... Why can't he just stay dead...
| stephfan6511 chapter 25 . 10/6/2011
Wonderful story. Very well written. The plot moved smoothly. I really enjoyed it!
| mssmith chapter 25 . 9/7/2011
Excellent story! It took me only about 4 hours of non-stop reading, but I did it, my housework has suffered, but hey...who cares, right?
So, I'm guessing that that would be Con, right? Looking at your profile, I see there is no other full length story that would be a sequel. Hopefully, someday you will.
Thanks for the fantastic story, I loved it...loved Javier!
| jendel chapter 25 . 6/21/2011
Great story- i didn't like how the books handled post-Scrog, so i love when fanfic makes it a babe story :)