Reviews for Daddy
novacaineorchids chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I cried when Bella said daddy. Great work!
CullensAreForever chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
That was amazing!

i loved it

i have read alot of fics with charlie's pov and i think youve written him the best

i really enjoyed this!
chelash chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
Whoa. That was amazing.

Very powerful!

I was always annoyed that Steph mentioned this scene (with Charlie talking to Alice), but never cared to expand it...
StarsOfSapphire chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Oh, wow. That was powerful. Man, wow.
ablablahh chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Oh... this is amazing. So sad... it's great :)
TaylorxxTwihard chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Wow. That one had me crying. It as great! Good work! -sniffle sniffle-
Lovelikethemovies chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Oh. Ohh. Really, it's just gorgeous, looking at this situation through Charlie's point of view. I was always very interested in it, every time I passed by this particular statement made by Charlie to Alice, I would wonder what exactly happened.
sues chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
That was so intense! Amazing job. :) I liked the character of Charlie from the beginning and it was very interesting to read about that dark time from his point of view. Thank you!

It made me think ahead to how he's going to feel when Bella changes-because I firmly believe she will in Breaking Dawn ;) -will she ever be able to come back to him? How will he react to losing her? I just loved reading his reaction to Edward after he came back in New Moon and then his reaction to the engagement in the 1st chapter of Breaking Dawn. Charlie and Bella have such an interesting relationship. I'm sure Stephanie will explore it more in Breaking Dawn and I am curious to see how she wraps it all up.
GoldenEcho7287 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
First of all, I have to say that it is totally awesome that you got Stephenie to beta this. So cool! Second of all, really good job. Beautiful.
Lady Nightfeather chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
wow you wrote this like 2 years ago and im just now reading it...

i really liked it. it makes me love charlie that much more...its sad that he still pines for the way things used to be, its going to be terrible for bella to leave him when she gets turned...

i love charlie now and im sad...see the power of a story, even a oneshot fan im melancoly...

but i really enjoyed,

"Daddy", it made me cry...sometimes crying is good...
Breanne Marie chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Feakn' cool yo! I hope this conversation is in the New Moon Movie! :)

Twilight Fan01 on
Elliania chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Lori, wow! That Charlie's POV was awesome! I totally loved that missing moment from New Moon. And to see Renée and Charlie relastionship other than on their daughter point of view was really nice!

Sorry to be late to review this fic, I'm totally new in the fandom. But as always, I adore your writing!


dsolo chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
This is so good! I really feel Charlie's pain.
briiittx xhc chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
This was such a great story! I had always wondered about that part during the story since Stephenie Meyer never wrote that part. Thanks!
NightShade Tears chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Wow. Really good story. And I can't believe Stephenie Meyer actually beta-ed it. Wow.
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