Reviews for The Bodyguard
bethabetha chapter 6 . 8/9/2018
i think the plot is an interesting idea, but so far the story seems very rushed. i feel like i mreading an outline instead of a well-written story, or as if it was written by someone very young. Draco so far seems very ooc... not really sure how to feel about this.
Yvonne Park chapter 38 . 6/15/2018
Bahahahaha! Oh Lordy, that is one way to end a story. Haha I really enjoyed this story. Harry and Draco are always so cute together! I wish there was more!Yvonne
Guest chapter 30 . 4/7/2018
Omg I’m dying
Guest chapter 24 . 4/7/2018
Finally Harry stops being so stupid
Guest chapter 19 . 4/7/2018
NONONONONONONONONONONO. No.
GoGoGayShitGoGo chapter 16 . 4/7/2018
My name says it all
Guest chapter 13 . 4/7/2018
Is it bad that all i hear from harry is "dont touch my boyfriend"?
Guest chapter 38 . 12/15/2017
I loved this story! The ending was great lol. I do wish we could have seen The look on Severus’ face about the makeover bit lol!
Guest chapter 37 . 12/15/2017
Lmfao I didn’t read the title of the chapter and then I got to the bit about the floating windmill painting and was like, “Is this an obscure Gorillaz reference or coincidence!?” Then I saw your Author note. Nice one lol
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2017
Wahhh Harry please.
Harry, I demand an apology.
We can get father out of prison, Harry. He’s a Death Eater and practically disowned me, but still.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/22/2017
Draco’s character is pretty weak thus far. He’s cowardly, openly terrified of Azkaban, and acts dependent on Harry. He even begs for Harry to save him at times. I just can’t see him as a bodyguard. Uncomfortable characterization.
babyvfan chapter 12 . 11/16/2017
Well I'm happy at least that Ron and Hermione didn't go into shrieking rants the second they saw Draco was with Harry. And I can't wait for the hot stuff to start ;)
babyvfan chapter 11 . 11/16/2017
Happy with the pacing this story is going
babyvfan chapter 10 . 11/16/2017
Awwwwwwwww but I am happy
babyvfan chapter 7 . 11/16/2017
Honest to god...a bit disappointing. No offense. Please please don't take offense. It's just I thought the vow would be so...much more, almost like a marriage vow or something but leave it to the Ministry to make it as dull and lifeless as they could. Unforunautely
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