Reviews for Naruto: Ninja of the Sand
Ella Bailey chapter 21 . 1/29
Nooooooooooooo! Keep Aroi. She's one of the twists that in my opinion bring the story together. If anything the only fact I believe to be a little sketchy is how the Kyubbi goes along with Naruto so easily. I'm not sure if I'm the only one saying this, but I believe when Naruto was having a hard time controlling the Kyubbi it made his difficulties harder, this made him easier to connect to others around him. Your story is fantastic, and the originality with the characters is superb. Just don't get rid of Aoi as Naruto's mother! Please!

Gabby chapter 3 . 1/27
This review goes for the entire series so far. I find it to be humorous and entertaining so far. Your intake on the story of Naruto with the twist is really entertaining. However your lack of grammar could use improvement on. I love the story so far however and I can't wait to read the rest of it. ;D
Guest chapter 21 . 1/25
Oi. Write. The. Story. First of all, What is it's name, where do I find it and thanks for writing this one. I agree, the grammar sucked but the storyline was funny and good.
Guest chapter 21 . 1/25
NO. Don't even go there.
guardianoflight15 chapter 1 . 1/6
so far you have done great on this storygood job:)
Guest chapter 21 . 11/17/2014
I hate writers who don't finish what they started I happen to like this story an am a huge fan of yours but to say the least what you are doing now is a disappointment to me and is shameful to your name and other stories I have lost faith in you as a writer
Guest chapter 21 . 6/27/2014
Noooooo OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooOooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I was raelly liking that story exept for the misspellings And the old lady bringing people back to life
KanikaOfTheRose chapter 21 . 12/11/2013
Please finish this story! I lived it do much! pretty please? *pouts*
elizarocks9902 chapter 21 . 12/9/2013
I want aoi to stay his mother!
elizarocks9902 chapter 20 . 12/9/2013
I liked EVERYTHING! Don't stop please! I liked your story SO SO much! Please keep doing it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
If mihoshi is bothering you kill her put sand on her and then blame Garra that's what I do
silverback95 chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Eliteken1364 chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
This is so good I'm rereading this for the second and probably not the last time
Guest chapter 12 . 8/8/2013
yagerbaby chapter 20 . 6/20/2013
Are you planing to not finish the story? It has been good so far if you would finish that would be awesome!
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