|Reviews for The Blood Tipped Feather|
| NamoraisLIFE chapter 16 . 10/16
Oh my GOD! This is so good! After reading fan fictions from Harry's prospective it's refreshing to get it from Luna... plus it is a help for your the fluff-lover in me! Please please PLEASE keep writing... your soooooo GOOD!
| Valiryo chapter 1 . 10/2
I'm completely lost..
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 10/1
Skip marker. Has some good parts, non sequiturs, abandoned sequel.
| davycrockett100 chapter 32 . 8/23
| Katie chapter 5 . 8/17
I give up. There is a lot of telling, very little showing and your plot is completely disjointed. It might be that it comes together later, but you don't have enough characterization to keep me interested.
| Simianpower chapter 2 . 7/1
It may be early, but I'm not hooked. I don't dislike what you wrote, but I might be missing the point because I don't see a reason to keep reading. There's no hook. From reading the other reviews, that seems to be the case even by chapter 10. You need an actual plot, not just train-of-thought and worldbuilding. Something to grab the reader's attention. That seems to be missing, so I'll pass.
| Nanchih chapter 3 . 6/21
Ooops. Not a big detail, but annoying. Where Ron says he knows Hermy (the bird) is a girl because he looked 'down below', you blew it. You can't tell which sex a bird is by looking for genitalia. Male birds do not have 'packages', external nor internal.
| Pixelatedzee chapter 5 . 6/10
Wow this story is refreshing, and it's complete!
| Bludflag chapter 1 . 5/19
For another, there questions were ludicrous,
Confusing begining, but what the hell, it might even be good. Will reserve judgment until later chapters.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 14 . 4/15
"DLP crowd"?! What? #baffled
Anyway, on to Ch. 15...
| Noble Korhedron chapter 5 . 4/14
Q. You based the '7800' on the '4400', right?
| Matt chapter 18 . 3/19
My sides at splitting XD
| Matt chapter 8 . 3/13
Gummy bears! I laughed so hard lolXD
| BlazeVein chapter 21 . 1/27
why no tell secrets? 2 words: Legilimancy and veritaserum.
| BlazeVein chapter 20 . 1/27
if harry died- twice already- why he is the ONE to had to defeat Voldy? I dont get it. Run to Rio better, lad.