|Reviews for Embodiment of Love and Destruction|
| Shingo the Pest chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Reincarnation story! OMG, the first chapter has made me so excited, this is going to be good. :D
| MayuRain chapter 16 . 4/17/2012
A very impressive story. In the beginning I had some difficulty with such a large piece of christian religion in the xxxHolic world, which is mostly shinto and buddhist based, but you made it fit somehow. Or more like I think I don't like it that you made Watanuki's powers come from him being gods angel rather than him being just a talented and special and strong individual. Which mostly stems form my opinion that for a fictional character god is a self-serving bastard (which is my personal OPINION.) Despite the fact that I don't like the concept of christian religion it didn't bother me so much because your story is just that good. Also made me wonder if you'd qualify Clow Reed as a god... Either way I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks -
Oh one more thing. Since its been several years since you posted this I'm sure someone else already corrected you but in the chapter where they meet Doumeki's grandmother you used the word omai for arranged marriage (with the pictures etc.). That should be omiai.
| Jenmoon1 chapter 16 . 6/13/2011
pritty good though diffarent from manga cannon
| yue no rei chapter 16 . 7/11/2010
Good story. It's sad that Kunogi's life just led to this purpose _. very interesting fic though and I live your take on their past lives.
| fouloldron chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
At the beginning of this fic you state that Doumeki and Watanuki already share an eye, yet later you ignore that Watanuki should have a gold as well as a blue eye.
Also you seem to be wavering when to have set this in relation to the original time line.
Threshing out would be a good idea too.
The base idea is very good, but the inconsistencies are jarring.
| Among the Audience chapter 16 . 5/25/2008
...You killed Himawari. And Watanuki has wings. cool.
Very nice story.
| Kaoru-chan chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
this is a great drama/cryptic/comedy fanfic. i like the domeki/watanuki. but everytime i find fanfics...it's always that pairing. try non-yaoi pairs. i wanna see one with a boy and a girl. two guys is cool...but it gets annoying after a while.
| ourforever chapter 16 . 6/12/2007
I love this story very much. It's by far one of the best Dou/Wata stories I've read. Thank you for writing this. )
| Mizurio chapter 16 . 4/14/2007
I absolutely LOVED this story. This is one of the best xxHolic fanfictions that I've ever read.
Keep up the good work! :D
| bluesonmondays chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
u noe, i actually have read this story at the other website, the official xholic website. n i LOVED it. now its here, i love it even more!
| yamanana chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
hey this was really great! I was kindo of surprised that you had posted it all on one day, but I was happy that I got the whole story in at once! I like it and hope to read more of your good stories
| RebbeLi chapter 16 . 2/4/2007
OMG, thois is so good! Your whriting is great! I love it! Tihs is my fav xHolic Fic so far ) And I love the hole Xhaiden and Kami bit ) How did you come up whit all this. I'm envios I can't belive you only have 9 reviews, (10 whit mine) Well, anyway. Keep them comming I have you on Author Alert )
| OLP chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
Something shaped like a DONUT, eh? LOL
| min chapter 16 . 12/12/2006
I love this story! But why the reviews are so little? *start to kill people who didn't review ur story* XDXDXD More!
| myst49 chapter 16 . 11/25/2006
OMR! this story is amazing! if only CLAMP would write this!