JD chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
great story construction. Nice conflict and resolution.
Jhaidy G chapter 1 . 6/3/2002
Wow... what a History.. I liked it very much...!


Please! I need more!
quazy chapter 1 . 10/3/2001
Very nicely done. i enjoyed it thoroughly!
gohaun chapter 1 . 9/28/2001
I loved your story it is very good, exciting,interesting, suspencefull, and sad at the same time. I would love to read more of your stories, and I will. Keep writing, I love your wotk, you almost made me cry at times, very very good job.
JamieLea Lightfoot chapter 1 . 7/17/2001
Drat! I think I'm gonna cry again! Really great story, I'd like to read some more of yours.
Dragon Trainer chapter 1 . 7/17/2001
You're the best. Man, this is so good, and its hard to believe that I'm the first to review this. Dratini, Drat, Dratini! Bye-for-now.