|Reviews for Dancing with Demons|
| TheOddOneIsHere chapter 26 . 3/5
| Lucicq chapter 26 . 1/18
Can Demons eat reanimated people?
| Kage-Shino chapter 14 . 10/14/2020
I figured he would have a larger part. Hmm, if Naruto had a ship, it would be with a Jinchuuriki...
| Huggiebird chapter 26 . 9/20/2020
This is so good! Ahhhh. I love this piece a lot ️
| Amnesiac Goldfish chapter 15 . 4/18/2020
I give you a tribute to such a wonderful story. Really. You made me inspired enough to make a new poem.
She's seeing everything and then nothing;
Waiting for nothing until there's something.
She's always present but never truly there;
Head in the clouds, she doesn't really care.
She sees shadows on some far off corner;
Drowning on stiffling air and not underwater.
She's bound in chains that others can't see;
Gurgling in madness and much unholy glee.
She kisses nightmares like bitter daydreams;
Burning her sanity from its very core seams.
She drinks poison and spits out acrid blood;
Swallowing sorrow in a tumultuous flood.
She whispers lovingly in riddles of fear;
Giving death's kisses as she lick up tears.
She's the caged beast deep in your mind;
Crooning a lullaby that you'll never find.
| Paul Lenzen chapter 26 . 1/15/2020
This is quite interesting and I'd like to read more eventually.
| ashika pl chapter 1 . 11/10/2019
Now that's some compelling story! Didn't know I would be much into a tale about demon who mercilessly eats humans and look what you've done ;).
I really like how the events are unfolding in your narration - it really draws you in and doesn't want to let you stop reading. It is interesting, unpredictable. I like how you generally try to be realistic - Naruto, despite his enormous chakra, still encounters many problems and life's not easy for him. Not all humans are easy prey and there are those who he has to respect, I love that. (only thing - I doubt he could learn to read Japanese that quickly, I've been studying Japanese for years and this is some helluva ungrateful bit8h, that language, and I know what I'm saying, I've been learning English, French and Latin too)
Another thing - I've got the feeling it's more your original story than an actual fanfiction - so many OCs, so many little aspects, so different storyline and finally Naruto is so totally not him ;). I mean, I get that he had to change being merged with Kyuubi and brought up by demons, but still, from my experience, your individual character is not something to be that easily overwritten. I think he is a little bit too OOC to really be Naruto.
Still, love the story, shame it's unfinished! Hope I'll ever write like you in English :(
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/17/2019
sad no update
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/13/2019
Eating brains improves language confirmed
Guessed as much, but wasn't stated as such after Sunny ate Granny's brains and became better next chapter (tho contradictory to explaination you gave, that he was always good at it when trying)
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/13/2019
lol just going aboit and asking abouy contracts
Sunny's not wring about that money lol
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/12/2019
lmao, even Sasuke likes Natsu
Sasuke spares Natsu after coming back to massacre Konoha
And apparemtly peepinginvestigating suspicious and likely dangerous threat to the village
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/10/2019
Ah, I thought he (Tsorn) would survive as an antagonist, but when the chapter of their demise came, I thought I was wrong. But now, he does survive, lol
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2019
he showed no signs of having good speech before, tho, even when calm. it would've made more sense to say that he improved by eating mayu's brain, and just left it at that.
it would be a bit of a stretch, even if he were to get info by eating brains, but it makes a lot more sense then the explanation you gave
| zerkses chapter 26 . 6/11/2019
This fiction ist awesome.
| Kordesha chapter 26 . 5/20/2019
Hope things are going well for you and you will be able to come back to work some more for this awesome fic!