|Reviews for Innermost Feelings|
| Mischief101 chapter 10 . 8/23/2013
I thought the flashbacks might be confusing or annoying but they're not. I like seeing the moments where they realize their feelings and the sweet ones where they are oblivious to each others feelings.
| mrs.addiecullen chapter 20 . 12/17/2010
| Avide chapter 4 . 10/14/2009
"was becoming very" isn't necessary, I think, when you make the sentence flow more with words like "was getting". Mix it up, lose a lot of "I am very" and "I did not"-whatever choppy, formal language you have a lot of, and throw more casual English in there.
Just a suggestion! I think it would really help the story.
| silver tears and wasted fears chapter 3 . 4/5/2009
HES SUCH A SWEETIE!
| OoverO chapter 20 . 10/5/2008
awe this story was so amazing!
ive been reading it all day while my mom thinks im doing homework
but it was so worth it!
this is so cute! ;)
i wish it wasnt over! ;)
its amazing! ;)
| Halle Alexis chapter 20 . 7/14/2008
i really like it
| wprincessannw chapter 20 . 7/9/2008
Beautiful story! Derek is a little OOC but I find his changes and growth to be believeable. Very well-written, one of my favs
| TroylovesGabi chapter 20 . 6/17/2008
you should write a sequel
| Thisprofileisempty chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Of the countless fics I've read on this website, I have to say that this is the best one. Not just for LWD, or Dasey ship... generally the best I've seen.
The story made sense to me, character development was excellent, was just perfect.. the only other time any form of fiction has gotten me as emotional as this fic was in M*A*S*H when Radar left the show.
| dreamingdarling chapter 20 . 1/23/2008
What a great story...I loved it.
you write excellently.
| smushsmash chapter 20 . 10/19/2007
omg i loved this story...it was totally wicked
| EdwardBella4ever chapter 20 . 9/30/2007
You should make a sequel to this story!
| princetongirl chapter 20 . 8/29/2007
loved it update soon
| bookwormzrock chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
Woah Nora and George Knew i didn't see that coming...
| shaynelovesCONVERSE chapter 20 . 8/3/2007
I'm totally a person who cries at everything, and i really hate it. so, i suppose for me to hate this story is a good thing. it made me cry so many times i lost count. it was just so beautifully wwritten and just so amazing and OMG i really hate it. but, you know, in a good way. one of THE BEST LWD fanfics i have read. derek might have been a bit OOC but... that was because we were seeing HIS thoughts and they were sensitive... and OMFG i just loved it. i almost couldnt read the last chapter because i knew it was going to be all sappy for me and... URGH. i jusst cant find words to describe it.