Reviews for Guardian
Guest chapter 15 . 7/24
Why does everyone change Minato's name!? It's messed up, Minato Namikaze is awesome
Guest chapter 15 . 6/30
Aaw..this is beautiful
DarksiderForever chapter 8 . 6/16
Uhm... WelP from really Good to crap! Somehow random plot device...
Guest chapter 15 . 5/24
The 4th Hokage's name is Namikaze Minato, NOT Arashi.
Guest chapter 35 . 4/13
Thank you
amj338 chapter 35 . 11/25/2016
Enjoyed this story very much
Thanks for sharing x
lovebishies chapter 35 . 10/5/2016
Good story wish there was a lemon ir at least more limes
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
Ace McKnight chapter 35 . 2/11/2016
A well done and interesting story. Obviously the departures from cannon are because of when you wrote the story (almost 8 years ago) as some of the other more recent commenters failed to recognize. As I said, it definitely grasped my interest in a way that most of these fan-fictions don't. Very creative idea with the whole guardian concept. Not as big a fan of what you did with the Kyuubi, but it was one way of solving that problem. I think the cannon approach makes more sense, but obviously you didn't have access to that when you wrote this. Hoping to read more from you eventually, but I understand if you no longer have time to write. Cheers!
xNaruHina chapter 17 . 2/8/2016
Didn't even read this chapter tbh. The note in the beginning is too much. Naruto knew his parents before he was 17. By that time, he also had a lot of control over Kyuubi already. Jiraiya during to training trip taught and helped Naruto with that control. You must not do any research at all.
xNaruHina chapter 15 . 2/8/2016
Okay Narutos dad's name was Minato Namikaze. He was NOT an Uzumaki.. Also this guy talks about needing a heart to be a guardian but what he did seems pretty heartless to me. Also he was planning test Naruto without the Hokages consent? That is grounds for treason and execution...
xNaruHina chapter 14 . 2/8/2016
Okay that was seriously fucked up and un necessary. Everyone did not need to know about the Kyuubi first of all and on top of that, that could have seriously traumatized people. This Arai guy needs to die painfully. I honestly don't even know if I want to read anymore of this story if this is how it is going to be... talk about fucked up..
xNaruHina chapter 11 . 2/8/2016
Sigh, you just had to force more drama didn't you. He has already been through enough, why not just let him be happy with Hinata?
xNaruHina chapter 3 . 2/8/2016
Uhm if Naruto had just summoned Gamabunta after he got to the surface they could have gotten away without any of them dying .-.
Guest chapter 35 . 1/20/2016
I finished this in one day while not the best it was still up there good job friend
898 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »