Reviews for Close Your Eyes and Pretend
X59 chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
This was brilliantly done. While the matter of how it happened was sad, it was really sweet to see Yumi being protective of Hiroki.
Star-The-Writer chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
iridescent bookyworm chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
I love this story. Your right the they should show more how Yumi's parents fighting affects Yumi and Hiroki as I thank you for giving me and idea of what it might be like for them
MoonlitxAngel chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I really like this fic. It was written very well. X3
LabyrinthDweller chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I love Hiroki so much and you did nothing but justice to that little boy and his big sister. The relationship is perfect between them, it's amazing.

Great work~ Keep it up!

trixter 93 chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
aw, and an awesome ending too, "a world without danger"

i feel sorry for hiroki,

great fic!
RenaYumi chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Aw! I love this! Never seen one quite like it! great job, i love how protective Yumi is, she really is a great big sister. Great job

bloodhawk268 chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
That was really good. Keep up the good work.
xiNHiSDREAMSx3 chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Aw I loved this story its so cute and it makes the perfect broXsis relationship!
Almighty Tallest Angie chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
This is such a lovely story.
Tomboy 601 chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Nice Angsty story. Did you know that i'm not any good at writing anything that doesn't have torture,angst or character death in it? The only other thing I can write is suspense

and i'm not good at that. I love anything that has any Angst or Horror in it. You name it, I read it. Great story!
Gravity Control chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
This is so beautiful! Very inspiring, very creative, very deep!
Amy chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
wow for a short fic that was AWESOME not many writers can do that.

animeska8ergirl chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
one word...beautiful!
Japanese-Fanatic chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
Ahh, that was sweet. Nice job!

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