Reviews for Close Your Eyes and Pretend
iridescent bookyworm chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
I love this story. Your right the they should show more how Yumi's parents fighting affects Yumi and Hiroki as I thank you for giving me and idea of what it might be like for them
MoonlitxAngel chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I really like this fic. It was written very well. X3
LabyrinthDweller chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I love Hiroki so much and you did nothing but justice to that little boy and his big sister. The relationship is perfect between them, it's amazing.

Great work Keep it up!

trixter 93 chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
aw, and an awesome ending too, "a world without danger"

i feel sorry for hiroki,

great fic!
RenaYumi chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Aw! I love this! Never seen one quite like it! great job, i love how protective Yumi is, she really is a great big sister. Great job

bloodhawk268 chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
That was really good. Keep up the good work.
xiNHiSDREAMSx3 chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Aw I loved this story its so cute and it makes the perfect broXsis relationship!
Almighty Tallest Angie chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
This is such a lovely story.
Tomboy 601 chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Nice Angsty story. Did you know that i'm not any good at writing anything that doesn't have torture,angst or character death in it? The only other thing I can write is suspense

and i'm not good at that. I love anything that has any Angst or Horror in it. You name it, I read it. Great story!
Gravity Control chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
This is so beautiful! Very inspiring, very creative, very deep!
Amy chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
wow for a short fic that was AWESOME not many writers can do that.

animeska8ergirl chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
one word...beautiful!
Japanese-Fanatic chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
Ahh, that was sweet. Nice job!

KelseyAlicia chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
I do love it! Nice expoling outside of the Code Lyoko Gang! Keep it up the good work!