|Reviews for Mothers and Brothers|
| Zuzanny chapter 4 . 9/8/2009
Will sam have any nightmares from that?
| sentarla chapter 3 . 4/13/2007
oh, yeah forgot to ask, can we have a sequel to the sequel? was just thinking, that um they didn't burn his bones and he died a violent death and I am sure he was pissed off with unfinised buiness, perfect for a spirit. hm, is it tempting? just a little?
| sentarla chapter 4 . 4/13/2007
a sequel...yes! after I finsihed the first one I saw the note at the bottom about the chance of a sequel. so natural i clicked on your bio and wow, lookie here a sequel! I am also not a jo fan. loved the story, happy he is finally dead!
| Brokenwind chapter 4 . 11/11/2006
nice ) awesome story loved it u really captured their characters well.
| teal-lover chapter 4 . 11/6/2006
fitting ending, though i'm curious to find out what happened to the real tommy. will ellen keep asking what happened to sam in the first place?
| LenJade chapter 4 . 11/6/2006
Great chapter. Way to go Sam! Kicking Chet's ass was great fun to read. I am SO glad they booked it when she offered to adopt them. I hate how she treats the boys. First, Dean's almost thirty. He doesn't need an adult to guide him. He's a professional in his own right and an adult... Great story, can't wait to read more from you.
| Antigone11 chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
“Dean hasn’t been able to deal,” he told her quietly. “Shortly after we visited our mom’s grave, he admitted that he felt responsible. He let his guard down… for a couple moments… He asked me to say something… and I couldn’t. I couldn’t say anything, Ellen! The one time your brother actually asks you for help… for support… and I… I messed it up.”
I am absolutely shocked that Sam would tell Ellen about this. Dean tells him something deeply personal and Sam tells Ellen? The woman who just ripped Dean a new one for looking after her daughter? I understand Ellen’s fear making her strike out at whoever's close by, but I still believe that Jo being on that hunt was 100% Jo’s responsibility. So while Ellen yelling at Dean is understandable, I don’t think it’s justified. Under those circumstances, it seems to be a real betrayal for Sam to tell Dean’s private emotions to this woman.
I like that you let both Dean and Ellen speak their minds. One thing I didn't like about the episode is it seemed like Ellen got to lash out at Dean and Dean stood there and took it.
| devianttart chapter 4 . 11/6/2006
Plese give us more Ellen stories. I really like the way you write her.
| charmed1of2 chapter 4 . 11/6/2006
I THOUGHT IT WAS AWESOME I PUT IT IN MY FAVS LOL SO WHATS UR NEXT STORY GOING TO BE CALLED LOL
| SadeLyrate chapter 4 . 11/6/2006
Poor Sam...that Shining of his is really getting out anyone's protective instincts...
But it's nice to see him fighting, too. I like hurt!Sam as much as anyone, but getting him beat the 'baddie-of-the-week' just...feels right.
This story's okay. Only thing I don't agree with is the boys' stand toward John. I mean, the second season's been pretty much about humanizing John Winchester. They've admitted he wasn't perfect, that he made mistakes...that he was just a human, just like everyone else.
And ever since (at least!) Dead Man's Blood in the first season, Dean's been looking at John through a different pair of glasses.
Granted, learning that their father was, apparently, partial in William Harvelle's death is probably something neither of them necessarily expected. But the perfect picture has been marred long before that. Even for Dean.
Back to the story though...
Why didn't Dean choose to finish up the research with Ash on the subject of W.H's death? Or did I miss something?
Thank you for a positively curious little tale. And apologies for that rant above. :)
| Ghostwriter chapter 4 . 11/6/2006
Great job. I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
| thesagerk chapter 4 . 11/5/2006
wow just wow - nothing more to it - just wow...
| KatieLB chapter 4 . 11/5/2006
Good job good ending... glad sam got even with Douglas...great job
| pinkphoenix1985 chapter 4 . 11/5/2006
I really enjoyed it!
| zeusfluff chapter 4 . 11/5/2006
That was an awesome last chapter! I was expecting Ellen to say something totally different... She's my favorite character besides Sam... Oh well... I loved the ending tho... Again great ending! Hope to see another story up and running soon! Thanks so much for sharing, zeufluff