|Reviews for The End|
| Raven Arya Amaranth chapter 1 . 1/27
Very well written. I'll agree with another; the ending was quite abrupt. Perhaps continuing until the end finally does come would have been a better point to make. Seems you stopped mid-fight.
| angelfire east 24 chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Brilliant story:D Well written and interesting:D
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
That was really good!
| TaciteMuse chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Hmm... seemed to end a bit abruptly, but perhaps that's simply because there's not that much more to say. Very nice writing, if dark, and lovely spirit.
| Bryan chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Wow. Just, wow! This is just an amazing piece of work! By the title I'm guessing we lose huh. Just tell me that the Priors lose most of their forces?
| elitenova chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Any chance of updating this. I would like to see th faces of skeptics who opposes any war to save humanity.
| Harm Marie chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Wow, this was very good.
| nwfairy chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
That was beautiful...
Was it based on the Linkin Park song? (not saying that's bad or anything I like Linkin Park) Cuase if it was it would make sense