Reviews for Overprotective, Overreacted
ScarletBoudica chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I love this story it was so adorable and in character!
BessieTheNinjaCow chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
wilkiswilk chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Wow! I can totally see that happening. Poor random man...always remember the three rules!

The only problem is that you spelled Yachiru's name wrong a lot. It's YACHIRU. But other than that, good!

Caveat Lector 52 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Haha! I can so see this happening. Yachire is such a little devil, but she's cute so it doesn't matter.
SithKnight-Galen chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
LOL, very nice. I could actually see Zakari reacting this way, and the others characters reactions were spot on as well.
Kichou chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Love it. It's great.
Kazima Kuwabara chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Poor guy...but her I wouldn't touch his is either. :0
arrancar125 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
that guty totally deserved what was coming to him. you should never throw a girl. especially if thay girl belongs to Kenpachi. great fanfic.
Blueezy chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
i LOVE the father/daughter relationship btwn zaraki and yachiru!

they make mayhem and violence lovable ;
incompletes chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
I LOVE IT! kenpachi and yachiru are my fav characters on bleach )
Artificial Life Creator chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
if you forget everything, ALWAYS remember the three rules!
xxnormalnormalxx chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
lolx...funny...and rather exaggerating typical of overprotective parents...
TheGypsyGirl chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Cute! that just made me feel good inside!
Odi et amo chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
My only critique is that it's "Yachiru" not "Yachrui" or "Yachriu." You spelled her name wrong constantly.

Other than that, I loved this. Great fanfic!
DoYouFindMeDreadful chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Aww, cute! I'm finding that I call every story with Zaraki and Yachiru cute ... but it is! As things progress I'm coming to the conclusion that Zaraki pwn's my soul. XD But, anyway, there were a few spelling errors but overall it was really cute. I could really see this happening too, so thats a plus. Good work.
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