Reviews for The Beginning of a New End
Guest chapter 17 . 2/3
I love this story is so sweet!
ShadowGallade chapter 18 . 1/19/2015
What kind of gym is this, don't think Koga can legally do that
dloold87 chapter 8 . 9/7/2014
umm Ash did not lose the battle against Samurai, he defeated his Pinsir and Ash's metapod evolved into butterfree.
Spitfire1941 chapter 20 . 3/3/2014
Fantastic Story, i would love to see a sequel of some sort or another long Pokeshipping Story this was very well done, its rare to find a story of such a caliber

i have only one criticism and that is a little bit OOC by the two once or twice but apart from that you got them down perfectly

this story deserves a lot more attention :)
Joey baldwin chapter 31 . 11/18/2013
Make another chapter please .
Bluemew919 chapter 31 . 1/7/2012
pachi pachi pachi! *clap clap* i read the whole story (it took a while but i read it all) and it was great! i loved it! so much pokeshippy love. i like the little indications and hints and how it basically went on like episodes but i couldnt help liking the last few chapters the best still. and how you wrote what happened after marriage was great. it was an overall enjoyable story. great job. :D
turle chapter 31 . 9/25/2011
okay, ewww for the last part. Awww, looks like Pikachu is getting a girlfriend!
turle chapter 30 . 9/25/2011
I'm with the pokemon finally!
turle chapter 29 . 9/25/2011
No, Misty! he said he loves you he means it!
turle chapter 28 . 9/25/2011
Ahh, how romantic! oh...sorry out of character.
turle chapter 27 . 9/25/2011
poor Ash and Misty. But at least it's for a few days.
turle chapter 26 . 9/25/2011
First Grovyle and now Gyrados that's bad.
turle chapter 25 . 9/25/2011
Those two should really shut up and kiss.
turle chapter 24 . 9/25/2011
What happened to Grovyle? Yeah, Bayleaf is crazy for Ash! That poor guy! I thought Misty would be jealous of that girl!
turle chapter 23 . 9/25/2011
I hate those stupid things! Sometimes I lose, but sometimes I win but I get something that I don't want!
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