Reviews for Behind the Curtain
debbieja chapter 6 . 1/8/2007
Poor Jayne seems all kinds of confused by River. Like how she told him what she was saying wasn't supposed to make sense to him

KariHermione chapter 5 . 12/18/2006
please update soon!
debbieja chapter 5 . 12/8/2006
Kaylee would defend her captain from the insults. Not that there wasn't some truth to them. Have to love Jayne's reactions to River insulting the captain

Ellisguy chapter 5 . 12/8/2006
I was wondering how Jayne could know a word like pretentious. Interesting!
Uhlume ffn refuses to log me chapter 5 . 12/8/2006
I love this chapter, truly. It's clever the way you incorporated the whole 'Jayne using pretentious' scene. I've always wondered where he had gotten such a large word from... ::snicker::
Lady Aphadriel-order of the kai chapter 5 . 12/7/2006
I love your story! I adore seeing how you embed the Jayne/River moments into the actual story. Can't wait to see more!

~Lady A
Tracy chapter 4 . 12/4/2006
Oh an update.

ahh but its a wee short one.

But its an update.

Can you feel the highs and lows you put me through?

So I'm really liking this. Please continue.

PS love River yelling "have good sex" and Jayne slapping her on the arse. great stuff. would have loved to see Simons reaction.
RomanceGuru chapter 4 . 12/4/2006
I do believe Jayne is flirting. Love it! Especially River guarding her ass afterwards. Tee he.

Nice dose of fluff to make up for how Jayne is acting in Angel.
Ceslas chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
Tehe- I like this alot. Jayne doing the Doc a favor...right ;) and smackin' 'grabby' lol

Like the staying in character with them too, not easy to do!
Half-elf chapter 4 . 11/30/2006
I love this series. You've got such a great sense of humor, I love it. I can't wait for more.
Ellisguy chapter 4 . 11/29/2006
So was River surprised by the fact that Jayne would slap her rear, or that she may have liked it? Hm? I hope you can find a way to continue with this. I always like Rayne
AikiaRiyen chapter 4 . 11/28/2006
Ah... the hand-behind-the-butt protective manouvre... I know it well.
michebabyblue chapter 4 . 11/28/2006
hey i like, this is one of my more favourite firefly stories, and can't wait for the next chapter.
debbieja chapter 4 . 11/28/2006
Seems Jayne and River were amused at the lack of helping from the ship mechanic and doctor. I'm thinking Jayne is progressing with those feelings if he feels compelled to give love taps

Shadow315 chapter 4 . 11/28/2006
i like its funny! MORE SOON please!
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