Reviews for Twirl
GuiltyPleasure3 chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
That was so weird and hot :)
LovePeppermint chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Oooh i rather liked this! The story had such a nice flow to it and the simplicity of it was very pleasant.:)
lorella moon chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Awww this was kinda cute
Red-tiki chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
aahhhh! I love this storryy! Pleeaaaaaaase PLEASE! write more :)
LaCosaNostra chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
That... That was sexy.

Like, reaaally sexy.
trapped-in-a-coffin chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Fluffy and amusing story

When ever I was reading/watching Death Note, I would think

"Near's hair looks so soft and silky...and curly... I wish I could twirl it!"

And just like near I twirl my hair...and I don't know why either...And I started to twirl my hair a LONG time before I even new what Death Note is.

Great story!

Love it~ 3
marzii chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Ah too cute! n_n Near is to sweet.

I've always adored his hair. 3

VERY cute fic, you should write a sequel! :]

Although I don't think Akane (the one I think you're talking about?) really has anything to with Near twirling his hair all the time. xD

He's always been like that in death note. LOL!

I love eet *-*
AEDReaper chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
love it.
becky9812 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
aww, that was adorable! great job on the story.
Bucket on the Head chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
That was so cute!

Favorited, definitely.
don't resist chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
I loved it~! Near and Mello are very entertaining in this. Giggling was Just too easy.
Also, as a random note: I'm very ticklish, so a lot of people don't hug me because I squeal and squirm. Instead. people play with my hair and such. I simply love it. And, I find Near easy to relate to.
Anyway~ I have to fave this and get my friend to read it.
kittykat chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Oh, this story IS fun. I love how passive Near is and how forceful and persistant Mello is. And it's a really creative idea for a story too. I especially liked Mello's quote,

"Your mind and mouth may not want to tell me anything about you...but your body's speaking is all too clear."

This is the best Mello/Near fanfic I've read yet, and I've read pretty much the whole archive.
archangelraphaelsdaughter chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
dude luvd it!

ur now one of my fav authors cuz all ur death note stories are awsum!
Einstette chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
lol this is cute ! i love it ! (but i love LxNear pairing better ! xD) is it possible if i request you make a LxNear fic ?

if not its fine no pressure, just not enough LxNear fics in the world ... xD
SmileWithEmptyEyes chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
oh, Mello is a tease!

you do good fluff, and everyone needs a little fluff in their lives
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