|Reviews for Twirl|
| LovePeppermint chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Oooh i rather liked this! The story had such a nice flow to it and the simplicity of it was very pleasant.:)
| lorella moon chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Awww this was kinda cute
| Red-tiki chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
aahhhh! I love this storryy! Pleeaaaaaaase PLEASE! write more :)
| LaCosaNostra chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
That... That was sexy.
Like, reaaally sexy.
| trapped-in-a-coffin chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Fluffy and amusing story
When ever I was reading/watching Death Note, I would think
"Near's hair looks so soft and silky...and curly... I wish I could twirl it!"
And just like near I twirl my hair...and I don't know why either...And I started to twirl my hair a LONG time before I even new what Death Note is.
Love it 3
| marzii chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Ah too cute! n_n Near is to sweet.
I've always adored his hair. 3
VERY cute fic, you should write a sequel! :]
Although I don't think Akane (the one I think you're talking about?) really has anything to with Near twirling his hair all the time. xD
He's always been like that in death note. LOL!
I love eet *-*
| AEDReaper chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
| becky9812 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
aww, that was adorable! great job on the story.
| Bucket on the Head chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
That was so cute!
| don't resist chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
I loved it! Near and Mello are very entertaining in this. Giggling was Just too easy.
Also, as a random note: I'm very ticklish, so a lot of people don't hug me because I squeal and squirm. Instead. people play with my hair and such. I simply love it. And, I find Near easy to relate to.
Anyway I have to fave this and get my friend to read it.
| kittykat chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Oh, this story IS fun. I love how passive Near is and how forceful and persistant Mello is. And it's a really creative idea for a story too. I especially liked Mello's quote,
"Your mind and mouth may not want to tell me anything about you...but your body's speaking is all too clear."
This is the best Mello/Near fanfic I've read yet, and I've read pretty much the whole archive.
| archangelraphaelsdaughter chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
dude luvd it!
ur now one of my fav authors cuz all ur death note stories are awsum!
| Einstette chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
lol this is cute ! i love it ! (but i love LxNear pairing better ! xD) is it possible if i request you make a LxNear fic ?
if not its fine no pressure, just not enough LxNear fics in the world ... xD
| SmileWithEmptyEyes chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
oh, Mello is a tease!
you do good fluff, and everyone needs a little fluff in their lives
| drkxbunnii chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Yay for MxN D Loved your fan fic 3 There's needs more MxN love in the world x3