Reviews for Espionage
Master Solo chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
very interesting
Stormsoul chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
I assume this is a first chapter. Just that its incredibly short if its a story.
Syntia13 chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Warning: this review is a negative one

Grammar: needs improving

Spelling: makes it hard to read (Megatron, fired, download - not: Mega tron, fried, down load)

Punctuation: non existent

Recommendation: get a beta-reader

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P.S. hope you don't get mad, I'm just trying to help. No, really :)