|Reviews for Schism|
| Twinchy chapter 20 . 11/12/2011
Wow, you blew me away completely with this story!
It is intelligently thoughtout, most entertaining, really well written and had thrilling pacing (for that accounts the fact I read the whole story in one go - except for the final chapter because I was dead on my feet already).
The portrayal you used for Azazel/Yed was wickedly gorgeous with all the evil, his snark and teasing, and especially his internal talks with his hosts John and Dean. *snickers*
You have Missourie down to par and I also loved the way you wrote the Winchester men together in the end. Not to mention how much I thank you from the bottom of my heart for Sammy marrying Sarah and finishing his law school degree, plus Dean eventually meeting the girl of his dreams as well and working in John's own garage again.
This is hands down the best AU fanfic I ever read to date, particularly with the gorgeous happy ending that all three Winchesters deserved so desperately! *smiles contently*
One tiny little thing though (and no offence, please)... I was just wondering because your fic lacks any sort of explanation why the YED finally died even though Sam only shot it in the leg, much like back in the cabin with their Dad being possessed, when it wasn't enough to off the demon at that point already?
And somehow, come to think of it, you never came around to reveal what became of those two demons in the old hotel - not to mention their human hosts - and little Michael.
*applauds and bows in awe*
| AquarianNightSky chapter 20 . 9/6/2008
Very good story. Although you left out what happened to little Michael. I liked it.
| Nicole chapter 20 . 12/30/2007
i really have to say, that this is the best supernatural fanfic i've ever read! you're really good! i enjoyed your story! Would made a cool episode on tv!
keep up the good work!
| Ivy3 chapter 20 . 8/24/2007
Well, that ending was certainly the fluffiest I've read yet in Supernatural fandom. Their dad's alive, Sam goes back to school and marries Sara (yay for mentioning a cannon character) and even Dean has an honest job and a girl. Too bad none of this would ever happen on the show, lol.
As for the fic itself- I liked it a lot. I love Missouri and the YED, so this was so much fun to read! I'm glad Dean managed to save the day and hey you even brought back the cute Reaper. Great job all around.
| L'insomnie des etoiles chapter 13 . 1/11/2007
Hey! I'm so glad you keep writing this ficthis chap was stunning! I can't wait for the next one; you left such a suspens at the end of this chap ...And I had a question: Michael Connely is an american author: did you use this name in purpose? (hope you understand the question; I'm not sure about the way to ask that..). Au plaisir de te lire, L'insomnie des étoiles
| L'insomnie des etoiles chapter 9 . 1/5/2007
Can't wait for more ;-)
| heartfallen chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
"They’re all dead. They just don’t know it yet" Nice line. I love the powerful descriptions while John/the Demon is talking. So very cinematic. All your descriptions are so crisp and clear. "he is so looking forward to reuniting the Winchester boys with their dearly departed daddy. He can hardly wait" Me neither
| SupernaturalGal6 chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Wow...this is really good...but very creepy...still awsome though!