Reviews for Naru: Konoha No Kurohouseki
Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
some grammar issues like using Knew instead of Know and leaving out words also please use quotation marks on both sides of speech as ,," is somewhat annoying as , is normally breaks in sentences without using .
coolchick87 chapter 15 . 11/15/2016
I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks.
AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
I'm always up for a Sasuke and fem-Naru story but your writing needs some work.
haleykerrhmk chapter 16 . 10/9/2016
I really enjoy this story but it's been years since you have updated it.
kittycat chapter 4 . 8/16/2016
Dear god the fan girls are after him!
Theunknownuchiha chapter 3 . 7/13/2016
I think Naru should have the sharingan
Lashay chapter 14 . 5/30/2016
You said in chapter one that Naru had black hair but Sasuke said in this chapter that she was a BLONDE!?
maxielimon chapter 15 . 11/20/2015
I really hope you continue the story. Even though its been a few years already, but it was one of my favorites:) Thank you for writing such a good story, I really enjoyed it.
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 7 . 11/5/2015
I vote for a new bloodline. And Sakura is so weak and pathetic. She is whiney and a waste of space. Anyways keep up with the good work! Oh and please update!
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 5 . 11/5/2015
Awe Naru and Sasuke are cute together! But the next time Sakura and Ino yell at Naru for kissing Sasuke or touching Sasuke I will kill them myself! I love this story
BloodySpade000 chapter 5 . 8/18/2015
I love naru's black hair
jikol chapter 10 . 8/9/2015
I think it's really good but I still think that u shouldve made sakura part of the team as a Boy! It don't FEEL RITE WITH SHIKAMARU in their team...a very cute boy version of sakura!
emme-hime chapter 16 . 6/24/2015
I just fund this stroy, and i really like it. i hope you would consider continue the stroy, please.
CharitinaX chapter 8 . 6/15/2015
But they're like twelve!
THEY'RE TWELVE. This is child pornography!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
In the first message Naru got it started with Dead instead of Dear. I hope you can fix it beacuse I was very confused when I read.
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