|Reviews for Naru: Konoha No Kurohouseki|
| Shinen no Hikari chapter 15 . 9/6/2011
Come on that was blatant Sakura bashing! The least you could have done was have Sakura AND Ino react that way! It would've made more since and been better. I wonder how she would've shut them both up?
| Jyoren chapter 9 . 8/25/2011
Really great stuff. Female naruto stories have been lacking in quality lately, so its nice to see someone putting an serious effort to it. The romance is quite realistic in my opinion and keep up the great work.
| kyuubi 1920 chapter 5 . 8/22/2011
dojutsu: crow eye
lv1: speedup reaction time
eyes turn gold
lv2: see chakra like hyuuga
pupil becomes slited
lv3: immune 2 genjutsu
white of the eyes turn black
lv4: eternal youth
hair: turn feather-like
lv5: x3 strength, speed, chakra control,
chakra becomes black
lv6: telepathy, telekinesis, enhanced IQ, photographic memory,
lv7: dojutsu always active
body turns into a crow forever
don't need 2 eat or drink
| lexibaby214 chapter 15 . 8/19/2011
I'm in love with this story and I can't wait for your next update! hope its soon :)
| god of all chapter 15 . 8/18/2011
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| XEvilXChibiX chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
really, totaly fuckin awsome! but might i sujest u use the proper character choice. insted of naruto.u u should have listed it under naruko.u which is his girl version. just causes less confusion and fusration is all ' but still great story!
| Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 15 . 8/15/2011
I like your story! Update soon!
| LadyGrimR chapter 9 . 8/13/2011
o.o 12 year olds are that seductive? By the time they're 15 they're gonna be fucking. Lmfao.
| risen truth ruthless lies chapter 15 . 8/11/2011
this is pretty good i like how you did the heaven earth seal its a very nice trick. hope you update soon!
| redfoxgirl chapter 15 . 8/10/2011
when will the next chapter come out I'm so excited
| Ookamithewolf chapter 15 . 8/10/2011
I never expected that both Naru and Sasuke would get both Orchimaru (at least I'm bad with name spellings lol)
Can't wait until your next chapter. Please update soon!
| BetahimeTsukiko chapter 15 . 8/10/2011
Yush, you live! Great preview, cannot wait for the whole thing.
| Jeah chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I think being descriptive is fine. The problem, however, is that there's just way too many typos. I suggest you run it through a spellchecker or get a beta. Also, what happened to the quotation marks? At some point in the chapter, you put in two commas in the beginning of a dialogue instead of a quotation mark.
| Hellcleaner chapter 15 . 8/10/2011
| xbamsod chapter 14 . 7/21/2011
I can't wait to see what you have planned for the second and third exams. Maybe adding a bit of love from Gaara later on might help Sasuke actually admit his feelings to Naru. Update Soon _