|Reviews for Naru: Konoha No Kurohouseki|
| He Who Rules With an Iron Hoof chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
is she like part uchiha and thats the sharingan? cuz that would explain black hair... i dont like uchihacest but i guess they are pretty distant relatives...
| lil'carlita chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
your story is very interisting, but watch your grammar. Still, I can't wait for the next chapt. so does Naru have a bloodline?
| AznPuffyHair chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
Not bad. Not bad at all, but why black hair . and don't say her mother is a Uchiha.
Still, a few spelling error here and there and the strange qoutation mark is all there is... seriously, how did it get there o.O?
| Hikory chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
Wah I loved this sakura isn't the kunoichi of the I loved everyone's reaction to the news,I'm glad naru passed,I wonder what sasuke was thinking when he learned of the who is the dead last?Hopefully it's not sakura but if it is have her get creamed but naru for something.I can't wait for the next chap update soon pleaze.
| Firework chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
| Yorozuya Gin-san chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
bad spelling, but fine by me. :) update!
| Fat Anorexic chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
Aww, sorry about your computer crashing..that must suck. Good chapter, a few spelling errors, but very minor ones. How strong is Naruto by the way? She seems to be holding back a lot..Anyways, good chapter and can't wait for the next one!
| Kawaii-Aikurushii-Kitsune chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
i love your story so far. great job.
| Rija chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
nice first chapter
sadly naru just don't seem anything like the real naruto. in personality i mean. T_T
everyone likes/admires her and she's good with ninjutsu etc... strange.x_X i'm curious how sasu and her will end up in the same team if she's this good. (well don't know if you let them be in the same XD )
| Yorozuya Gin-san chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Update soon. :)
| Stormraven chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Nicely written and really like the storyline. Hope to see more in the future!
| Tioman chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
i like it! yay!
| Hikory chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Wah I loved the first chap,I can't wait for the next one update really soon pleaze.
| Flyinggoddess chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
very good story ) has for the title i sugest 'female atraction' or 'blond does mix with raven !' D good luck
| Fat Anorexic chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Very nice first chapter! Very smooth, and VERY descriptive! I loved how you kept everyone in character. Some writers make the female Naruto into a Mary Sue and then it just screws the whole fanfic up. I'm rooting for this to stay a non-Mary Sue though. Whoot! Oh, and I noticed some minor spelling errors. Nothing major, but that was all that I could find that you would need inmprovement on. Again, great first chapter and keep up the good work! Ja!