Reviews for Naru: Konoha No Kurohouseki
DeathNoteMaker chapter 3 . 12/9/2006
That was awesome! Naru-chan is so bad! XD
DeathNoteMaker chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I like this story! XD
SSJ4 Sailor Menz chapter 4 . 12/8/2006
This is looking very nice. Very nice indeed...

Any chance for an update? _~
thsunami chapter 4 . 12/7/2006
about a blood line it depends is her father still the fourth because of the hirashin technique that could be copied some consider it to be a bloodline. some describe it as the ability to teleport ( body flicker ) through placing chakra on people or seal as markers and by projecting charkra through light giving a faster flicker without seals other say it's two part a enjutsu that projects light blinding temporaly the opponent, the other part is creating a after image or a still image of the last position of the caster but both reley on speed traing ( like lee perhaps also using body flicker and seal body fliker through three point kunai ) to properly use the techniques

other then that by being a demon carrier she alreadly has one just like garra and his future children will control sand she should b able to do the same but with kyuubi red charkra ( or chrakra ) like naruto did in the battle of the valley of the end using the red charkra just like garra both as a defense and offense. Even a taijutsu style could be created to enhance it as her charkra could act like garra sand both like as extensions of strikes and as weapons ( blades and wips for long range ) to to forget that kyuubis charkra just like garras has a elemental quality FIRE

Other idea that i herad was the eye jutsu like you said ( if you do it please not the eyes there are already so many eyes bloodlines ) was to slow time around her and also creates a flash light affect going in and out of the temporay field, better chrakra control and stamina the greater the time displacement and time in the temporal field.

One other thing as a demon container her body changes when she ( or naruto changes, also why black her and not blond? )

so her changed body could be considered as a blod line similiar to the inusuka that gives more beastly qualitys ( claws ) and enhanced smell. Also the demon eyes could be used ( kyuubis eyes ) bperhaps better night sight but lack of color or like demon legends she can see into the soul ( or auras ) a inner penetration perception eyes like the saying that a demon can see into your heart and see your sins and greatest fears.

also theres one thing nobody has ever noticed she can enter her own mind, naruto does this to talk to the fox but wht no one has ever thought is while in her ( naruto ) own mind ahe can see and relive memories maybe even seeing things she did not notice also ass it is in her mind the time shuold be different inside then out so in other words see could see a enemey do the hand seals then go into her mind practice it by copying what her memory opponent did maybe even overlaping herself over the memory in her mind and come out with little or no clue as what she did and she learned the jutsu or learn the taijutsu moves.

similiar like the sharigun but not as fast also taking more mental strain and focus depending on how many times used and how long in her own mind
kit chapter 4 . 12/5/2006
kyuu chapter 3 . 12/5/2006
AnimeKage chapter 4 . 12/5/2006
i love this story it has action a sence of humor and romance that is totally sweet. Update soonn!
blackangel chapter 4 . 12/4/2006
This is great!
Odin's Scribe chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
Not bad. The Naru/Sasuke relationship is really coming along. Keep up the good work.
Draonheart0000 chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
nice, plz update more
yaoiuke101 chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
please update
Blaze931 chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
Nice story :) make naru have sharingan plz, lol your chapters are interesting and funny, more funnier then 1 of my stories i believe :) update soon
Hikory chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
Yah they passed.I'm sure sasuke learned from his mistake bout pissing off a female.I can't wait for the next chap update soon pleaze.
Hunter Hatake and Neko Uchiha chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
this great story pleaz write more soon
LittleRedWren chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
I vote for sharingan
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