Reviews for Witness
Aireonna chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Aww! This made me wanna cry! You cant just end it there! They cant die . not now...,please. I loved it! Great job!
Nhelsea Caylor chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
wow. thats freakin great. yea.
Prunella chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
very nice. i always like your writing!

i like how you did the dialogue; it's very original.

good job!
wingedauthoress14 chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
OMG! that was wicked awesome! i loved it! -faves it-
BloodHeron chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Beautiful. Simply masterful.
missingno1010 chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
That was such a great story! *sniffles* Write more soon!
Tanya Lilac chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
aw. that was incredibly touching. falling- i like the way you used it in different contexts. but there are a few spelling errors you might like to fix- "She can feel dirt beneath her fingernails as she class at the grass" it seems like claws would fit in there... and .. there was another one, i think, but i can't find it anymore *grins sheepishly* but i liked your one shot- you did a great job with it; goot luck in the ten-squared comp!

*Kat
tone3891 chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Great story. I liked it alot however it is boggling that a ninja can be considered low-down in killing kunoichis? No offense just that isn't is a duty or job to do so?

All in all though it is good.
tomboy901 chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
*sniff* Oh god, that was BEAUTIFUL! How can you have such a good writing style? XD
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